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ChloeTheKinky
22/yo extreme fetish writer - she/her - I write for myself (maybe others too) - Chronically British -
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Editing, you need it. A lot. The lack of capital letters distracts from what otherwise might have been a good story. If you don't have an editor, put the story in Google Docs, and it will automatically help you with punctuation, grammar and spelling.
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Ok, thanks.
Why is there a human tag? You don’t need a human tag and an Equestria Girls tag at the same time?
Where did you get the idea that the name Rainbow Dash is one word instead of two? I mean, the correct formatting is right there in her tag. (People seem to make this mistake the most with Apple Bloom, for some reason I've never understood.)
That was pretty neat. A few mistakes still, but unlike your previous story, nothing that was overly distracting.
Looking forward for more.
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Google says it’s two words.
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Yes, exactly. The name "Rainbow Dash" has always been two words -- and yet it still shows up as one word in the latter half of your description, along with a missing capitalization for Applejack:
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My apologies. There must be an error on your end. I corrected that error a while before. Thank you regardless