When Nomulus Thel, dovahkiin of Skyrim, enters Alduin's Portal to Sovengarde to defeat Alduin World-Eater, something goes terribly wrong, and he is instead transported to Equestria. Nomulus is stripped of equipment, his Voice, and most of his magic. Everything that made him a force to be feared in Skyrim is lost to him now as he is transformed into a simple Equestrian unicorn. He now has but a shell of his former power, and is forced to adapt to this new world of colorful, peaceful ponies. However, something is amiss in Equestria, and soon, everything is about to change...
A/N: I know that there are a lot of different Skyrim crossovers out there, but all the ones I've seen are all about ponies being transported to Skyrim, or a world based off of Skyrim. I wanted to take a different approach, and write a story based off of this random idea I got one day. If this has been done before, I apologize, and will take away my claim of originality to this topic (though, depending on how much work I've put into the story, will most likely not take the story down, unless I'm forced to.)
I hope you all enjoy my second attempt at fan fiction, and this intricate story I'm going to try to create.
I also consider Nomulus Thel (the Dragonborn) to be an OC, since I'm going to be creating his personality, etc. from scratch.
My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic is property of Hasbro.
The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim is property of Bethesda.
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*Wishes Skyrim disk didn't explode in Xbox*
Well this is going to be interesting :D
1268489 forgive me if the fighting scenes are a bit dull, I'll try to spice them up best I can, but this is my first attempt at them.
1268674 Nah, the fighting scenes are fine
They have their own charm to them.
1268682 Well that's good
. Great to know I didn't screw that up 
guessing "Daar Faal Dovahkiin Tol Wah Krii Alduin? Ha! Nis Orin Krii Aar" means
"This the Dovahkin who is to kill Alduin? HA! He Can't even beat me!"
1271659 eeeyup
. Something along those lines, hehe.
1272468
It helps with words like
"Dovahkiin" then "Alduin" followed by question mark. was guessing "HA" was a triumphant laugh. and given what we know of him and his motives it fits standard minion gloating.
1273082 That's basically what I had in mind
. Luckily I was able to find a sort of translator from English to Dovah online; it would've been way harder otherwise 
To be honest I was really starting to get into this by the end! And the action scene was definitely better than most authors' first attempts. Cut yourself some slack! My only thing is that you should seperate the paragraphs with a margin to give the readers some "breathing room" if you will. I can't wait for the next chapter!
1288189 Thanks for the feedback
I will definitely go add the margins to the first chapter, and as for the second chapter, I'm working on it every chance I get 
. Hard to fit writing time in with school and a job 
. I'm also planning to make it longer than Chapter One, so I'd say expect it to be ready in maybe (and this is a pretty big maybe
) a week or more. Again, I'm working on it every chance I get; so many ideas and plans are circling in my head, it's sort of hard to organize them 
. All I can say is this: expect some pretty big battles in later chapters 
Awesome, looking forward to Twilight reading the other books, and experimenting with her new magic.
Oh Twilight... your going to burn things aren't you?
1384817 You just gave me an awful idea for chapter 2
tyvm 
1383858 Glad you liked it
.
1386896 MUAHAHA! >:D