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FIM Fiction


No matter how dark the story, I'll do my best to make it have a happy ending. If I have not updated anything for 1 year, it means I'm dead.

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Welcome reader. You are in control. What you say, happens. There are limits, yes. But those limits are to be tested. When you and others are God, will you choose to be cruel? Or to be kind?

What you say, goes. No matter how absurd.
Remember, the Pony must obey.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 43 )

She makes a friend named Ambient Light, a red filly with glowing stripes.

(This is how it works right?)

She is revealed to not have a tail through a backstory as a filly. As such, even though she tries to be level-headed, she is extremely insecure about her appearance and whether others like her or not.

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Indeed that is how it works.

I would like her to be in the timeline where Discord wins.

She found with each step, her breath curled into the mis-matched world. Her heavy breath forms odd and odder shapes that seemed to echo the stars themselves.

Some found life, others still blinked and never woke again .


Spying such stranginess her friend, Ambient Light, thought nothing of the strange shapes that began to fill the sky...

Beyond the world that had just begun...or had always been?

A woven knott of oak bound a pony. Stiff and old. Little escaped the cage but, for a ream of long...long mane...that trailed in curls of vivid rainbow light.

I can't help but thinking dark implication of in-universe explanation of what exactly happened to her that she ended up becoming who she is now, where they (us reader) decided what happen next. (Which include something like what she feel.) :rainbowderp:

So author, may I know how the 'next chapter' works? Like what if I type something that maybe contradict with existing comments?

She have the Special talent of being really good with puzzles and Riddles,as her Cutie Mark is a Puzzle piece.


(This concept sound so incredible...)

Why is there only an other tag?

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I believe you will understand why once you read what this it about.

She likes mushrooms

Huh. This seems like an interesting concept. Perhaps I'll follow along.

If we want to have a little fun, let's give her either a sense of sarcasm, some sass, or both.

Her name shall be Amber Jigsaw, I believe.

I like this idea. Let's hope it keeps the shine.

She will have a keen interest in games like Pokemon, and her favorite pokemon will be Vaporeon

She also meets and befriends Pinkie Pie and Discord


(Sound good?)

She looks within and remembers something about who she was.

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If things contradict, then I decide what is chosen. Unless I decide to have a vote.

If you need a description of Ambient, let me know lol

I am... very confused. I think you may have interpreted some people's suggestions oddly, or you just wrote them completely differently than I expected (maybe both?). One note I could give you— a desert doesn't necessarily have to be a sandy one. A winter tundra is a desert also. Amber and Ambient seem to be out of said desert and into what sounds like Sweet Apple Acres, though, so let's leave that well enough alone and say SAA is where they currently are.

I don't believe we have a coat color for Amber yet. Given her name, that color itself (amber) is a pretty good choice. It also makes Rainbow Dash slamming into her pretty believable since it's very similar to Applejack's coat.

Since we have no back story for Amber or Ambient yet, let's say neither of them know who Rainbow Dash is, so they need to introduce themselves. They can ask Rainbow if she knows how they got there, and if we'd like to be a little later in the show's timeline (or late enough), Rainbow can casually say that they must have wandered through one of Discord's random portals again.

I'll stop there and let others continue.

Unsure as to what age Amber is so... she has crush on Applebloom?

Mmm…Interesting,It was subtle,But I noticed my Change,Cool!

Ok,so what about next time,she gets herself a Mouse Mascot?it would be a little clever Guy.

Also,let’s make her Mane Blue.any Tone of Blue it’s fine.

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Is mouse mascot a reference to something?

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Well,no.I just think it would be neat.Buut,if You do want to make it a Reference to something,I’m Fine with that

And now that you put the idea in my head,maybe you could do it so he also his Unusually Good at Cooking:raritywink:

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Amber sings. Ambient likes it and compliments her.

Wow,pretty interesting.this is a great and unique Story.It’s feels like Twitch plays Pokémon but with a Fanfiction Story.

This makes me Wonder,if the case comes and there is too much people wanting to participate,Will there be something similar to the anarchy/democracy sistem?that would be interesting.

Now,what little thing could I add to little Amber this time?how about…:
Now,when she Talks,she is Really Blunt and Honest to the point that she has to explain that she doesn’t means any offense frequently to those who don’t get her.

In the next chapter,I will start contributing to the story,But now I will leave with this.

Oof, I didn't see the comment that led to the AB attraction last chapter… Then again, it's been a while since the last update, so maybe my memory is just terrible. :facehoof:

Alright, let's see... if they're being left off in the orchard I guess my contribution will be: they're woken up by a stampede of some sort (could be foals, dogs, sheep, rats, whatever, you choose— and 'stampede' is relative), followed by Fluttershy calling out for them to stop. Why? Well... let's have another commenter provide that. :trixieshiftright:

Also, you spelled 'douche' incorrectly. :rainbowlaugh:
Then again, it's Discord... :trollestia:

Hey... What do you think would happen if Amber met me? I bet Pinkie'd introduce me.

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"This makes me Wonder,if the case comes and there is too much people wanting to participate"
If that happens I will eat my hat. In the just in case scenario it does happen I have a recipe that allows me to bake a hat shaped cake.

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welp,lets wait and see shall we?

and just for the record,You just jinxed it:raritywink:

Hm. I think Ambient and Amber should get to know each other more. Oh also, Ambient has a friend named Midnight Splash, a thestral-pegasus mix. Perhaps they would love to meet Amber. Also what is lust level, I don't get it.

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Its a system I created in case people of fimfiction tried to make it into a sex story.

I want "it" to comment on pepperoni pizza

The "voices in her head" become an enchanted scroll with different ink colors for each of them.

(I'm kinda tempted to make Amber meet Thora, but I'll wait until Thora and Amber are more developed.)

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Innnnnteresting. It will be done from 6 onward until someone changes it.

Amber let out a groan as she got up. She grabbed one of her ribs and screamed as she shoved it back in place.

AAAAAAAAAH. Who's idea was that
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Apple Bloom and two other fillies wondered around the yard, talking and petting the animals. Amber's eyes slid around the area, before landing on a daisy. Amber went over to pluck it, before walking up to Apple Bloom. "Here." she said stiffly. "A pretty flower for a pretty girl."

OH DEAR. A war between Applejack and Amber will happen
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Amber finally is givin mind with a soft woman voice and decides to explore her surroundings by first exploring (season 6) Ponyville.

SHE befriends a pony named Bon bon (a secret agent)
Lyra Heartstrings ( a pony full of curiuosity)
Amythest ( Jealous of Twilight Sparkle)

Bon bon and Lyra have invited her to stay with them out of sympathy and comfusion.
"She is so weird and who doesn't know what 2+2 means? Even babies know that."

She has an obession with mysteries and puzzles (even from books)

Ambient gets taken to the orphanage.
(Just because) and is not happy :rainbowlaugh:

She then starts getting this weird feeling of something but doesn't know what it is

This is such a bad idea for so many reasons:rainbowlaugh:

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Is that a good "huh" or a bad "huh"

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Eh, didn't realize another me would be here.

I mean I assume it's another me heheh.

Comment posted by FIM Fiction deleted Apr 21st, 2023

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They can now be heard by everyone within around (5 feet/1.5 meters) can hear what is written if the words "I say" are said before what they want to say.

Pros
*They can now speak

Cons
*Others can hear them
*They have go out of their way to say "I say" before the words they want to be heard

Let's keep this wave rolling. Literally. Cave becomes an island in a large ocean.

Amber stumbles upon a mute changeling that has amnesia. It remembers two things. It's name is Blank Slate and it knows a silent language that only the red voice and the green voice understand. It can only hear the green voice and Amber. It can't hear Pinkimena or the red voice.

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