this is a story that brings true friendships and tests it to the maximum, lots of heart breaks, lots of tragedies,
lots of drama,
in this story, Octavia (me) finds a girl, who along with her (his) two best friends (vinyl and rarity) all fall in love with pinkie, and the whole mess starts from there. There are things that will test friendships to the absolute maximum, trusts are broken, and even death?! all of this happening within three months and two weeks, its a pretty crazy situation, it's finnally over and now hopfully you can enjoy the ride along with me and my friends in this... this is written based off a true story from of my POV from it all...
Chapters (4)
hope you like my first fic everyone, please; give me any and all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, any flaming/trolling will not be tolerated
but again hope you enjoy
i hope to have chapter 3 done by the 7th of sept so as to not keep you all waiting
*edit* this is based off a true story just throwing that out there... for a third time?
Hello!
I think your story has potential, but there are quite a few grammatical errors. If you want, I can proof-read/edit it for you.
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yes please I'd love that, and thanks, and honestly the real dramatic part is at the end, trust me, the beginning/middle is kind of slow, but the end is where the the story gets real good, but I cant just jump in to the end with out some explanation to the events that led it to what it is