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A very sweet and cute story. Well done.
Why didn't I have this faved...?
Eh, fixed!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Awesome job!
HNNG~
Hmm, I expected more explicit pictures.
Oh well, I was not disappointed.
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GOD, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!?
HOW DARE YOU NOT HAVE A STORY FAVOURITED!?
will read, fur sure
3376064 dat profile pic
So heated, and then the last part is so cute. I seriously changed from, "Hot damn" to "Aww" in a second. You seriously just made me have a bipolar moment. But you know what? I don't care because this story made me feel more emotions than the amount of ships in the MLP fandom. And I loved it. Good job.
Boy I sure waited that chapter to come out....
.... nearly seven months.....
.... TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT!
Awesome ending! (pretty hot, yet totally sweet)
Gather round, fellow Bronies and Pegasisters, it's review time!
Full of good prose and definitely not lacking in the feels department either, this story is a major leap forward in terms of quality and visual realism. The artwork really helped make the characters come alive, and it helped me visualize what was happening at times. And no, I didn't copy (all of) them. I do admit I am a little biased, though. Octavia and Vinyl as a couple is one of the first shippings I ever read fan fics about, and continue to do so today. And your story, dear author, didn't disappoint. I eagerly await your next great epic.
~Faust Fan Five
Woo finished!!
Been waiting forever for this chap... It didnt disapoint
Okay, that was great! I'll be following you, dear author, with great interest.
Really enjoyed this from start to finish, Great job!
I'm a bit sad it isn't longer... But all good things come to an end, sadly
I'll have to take a look through some of your other stuff and see if there's anything interesting. I like your writing style and would like to see more
I'm impressed with the amount of content you squeezed out of the events of less than a day. A very well made story.
-ClarinetOverlord
Aaaand that was awesome. The story in general was very touching, though the feels were broken up occasionally by Vinyl's no-so-eloquent language. But that's to be expected. As for this final chapter... I didn't wait for it. I literally just read the entire story today. But I would've gladly waited an entire year for this surprisingly good combo of touching and clop.
Peace out, yo.
-The Guardians.
To the author
Well i thought this story was very well thoght out and written. I do think it deserves 2 mustaches as a praise for feelings and because Dj Pon3, or vinyl, is my second favorite pony. so here you go, just for you.
Not sure if should be 'but' or 'put'. I'll... I'll show myself out.
i really liked the story but why did you remove the pic's? to mature??
I am honestly glad I read this . Keep it up.
Hm...a well done doesn't seem appropriate for this ending. How about: Hell yes, this was so cool and hot. That sounds about right.