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The adult one? Earlier chapters had nude pictures in them.
Ahahaha, dat line
Amazing ending for an amazing story!
halalaaaa. Vinyl, what are we going to do about those weird line of yours ?
anyway awesome way to solve things
Can't wait for the grand finale
That line. Vinyl just pulled off Charlie Sheen tier WIN. This would be a wonderful end to the story right here.
2329609 Yeah... But I may as well at least TRY to put that little extra 'omph' into it, you know? Just a little after thought. I already have the tags up there, may as well.
2329650 A reward to those that sat and read the entire thing? Understandable. Can't wait to see how you pull it off.
That line is so bad, it's brilliant.
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That line... I may have to use that now...
And what a wonderful, hilarious, and heartwarming chapter. I look forward to 'Soon.' It had better be very soon.
that line...biggest letdown in FiMFic history
great story, glorious end, right up to the most anticlimactic one-liner ever...so much build-up
2334064 And THAT is the true magic of the story...
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true, but it still hurts
2334108 How do you think Octavia feels?
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or AJ for that matter
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Well enough I'd say.
Really liked the fact that Vinyl shouted her joy at... let's say midnight, to the neighborhood. Really adds to her quirkyness.
My guess was wrong? ...Well, you do have to keep Vinyl in character...and it would have been a huge cliché....
Best. Story. Ever. Period. I'm so sad that I've put off reading this in so long. Imma going to sulk at my failures now.
Only one final chapter? Ffffff!
Soooooooooon!
Every time I read this fic, I keep imagining it as a theatrical play, performed in front of an audience.
I would love to see this performed.
Absolutely my favorite fic ever. The writing is amazing, the emotions tangible, and the comedy hilarious. By far the best fic I've ever read (an I've read a lot of them)
that was too perfect
he says
he says
2787834 You look like you are about to murder him...
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2799851 I want to join
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2799938 Well, I see you have it covered...
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don't worry
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2804688 Time travel!
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2804794 You don't talk much, do you?
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2805308 LOOOOOOOOL
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2805361 Still good, but not as.
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2805853 BETTER! BETTER! MUCH BETTER!
that one liner...... soooo trollled...
Perfect story? Perfect story.
well apart from the fact you've left your readers nearly half a year - yes Half a friggin year for "The final chapter" I'd say this was a very good story. But one thing an author should never do is make a promise without delivering.
overall story rating.
/ 5
3122669 I get caught up on other things easy. Think of me as a painter that goes "Eh, this paintings getting old... Oh! I know! I'll make a new painting". I'll get back around to it... But I tend to lose track of myself.
3122859 fair play mate.
I got to admit I probably came over a bit harsh with my comment too, sorry - had not slept well the night before and was still in caveman mode when I was typing.
3354888 It's what I call an "experiment take". We throw in what we THINK the voice is. We go with it for the story, see how it looks, then make some changes to it for another story after. After this, I found the perfect recipe for Octavia and Applejack. All in the name of experimentation.
3354955 uhh, do you mean in another story? Cuz all the chapters so far have had weird unnatural dialog and narration for Octavia...
3354977 No. I mean because of this story, I've figured out how to write Octavia's speech patterns. This was an attempt at getting it, now I understand what needs to be done and what doesn't.
That...was the best proposal, answer, and subsequent dialogue I've ever read. Holy fracking frack...
That last line...
Wait, 'adult' chapter? ...Pit?
Yeah?
Go hide in the closet.
Why?!
I AM YOUR COMMANDER AND AS SUCH YOU WILL OBEY ME!
Eeep!