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"Stupid question, Vi... But you do have 'it' right?"
It took me over two minutes of staring at the screen to figure out what was going on at the end. I thought he was refering to the 'it' in Vinyl's previous statement, "But she's worth it..." and Joe was questioning whether Vinyl was sure about her relation. Then I was mystified by Vinyl's mood swings. So they're talking about an actual possession? Is he refering to her missing her necklace? Was Vinyl suppose to bring something?
It seems a bit hard to follow in this chapter.
There is the constant "it" which at first seemed to be a piece of music then "it" turned into a gift (ring or necklace) came to my mind
The next chapter will hopefully clear this up... right?
Whatever happens, keep on doing this!
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I thought they were referring to the engagement ring, but that's just me.
1370629 It's just an off note to build up what exactly is going on. Context clues and such refer to what 'it' is.
1370766 That's the point of the chapter. You are left confused as to what exactly these two were talking about. Next chapter, it's put into perspective so the reader can say "Oh, now that makes sense". Much like walking in on someone's conversation, you most likely won't have any understanding of what they're talking about until all the pieces are presented.
1370825
Thank you, that makes a lot of sense when you put it that way
1370873 I'm trying for a new edge to this story. By your reaction, I can tell it is working well enough.
Update
Where do you get those pictures?
I've visited Jonh Jonseco galery in devianArt and those doesn't apear.
Pretty sure what the "it" in this chapter is starts with an R and is four letters long. Not really all that hard to draw that conclussion, because lets face it, even if Vinyl may be out of it most of the time it still wouldn't be the neckalace. If she lost that, she'd be all over the place trying to find it because it means so much to her.
I will read this later, if only because the cover image is the same image I use for my avatar. And also because it's ScratchTavia, which is the second best ship.
this is a great story. please continue!
Love this so far, keep going. Also, Happy B-day!
I usually dislike endings to a chapter like that, but rather than putting me off, it really uh..intrigued me, the pic was also a nice addition :)
"If I could rearrange the alphabet, I'd put my dick in your ass", Was my first thought. True story.
1378374 Seeing as they're both girls...
1378378
Ooh, kinky.
1378383 No...
Are you going to give a reason how people got names like Rainbow Dash, Vinyl Scratch, and Octavia whatever last name you pick for her? That's my only pet peeve right now, but it's a major one. It's also why most EAH (Equestrian as Human) story falls flat. Now I trust your judgement, as Know Your Mare was kickass, but it's a bit strange. However, you added pictures, which almost never happens, making this story decent. Unsure what to rate this, but I'll keep watching.
1404535 Right you are. Thusly, why Vinyl's name isn't Vinyl. Octavia -being Octavia- is the only one who adresses her by her real name. And yes, other names will be explained. Example: Fluttershy was given that as a shorten of her name as well as her aversion from flying. And yes, unicorns still have magic and pegasi can sprout wings; there will be a plot point about that. But you know me, I always have a near bullet-proof plan ready to go. Trust in me, this will be great.
1446038 No. I put in the description where they came from.
UPDATE THIS!
Why was this in my read later list for such a long time???
Planning to propose but forgets to buy an engagement ring. *slow, sarcastic clap*
1374818 Oh hey, I know you!
that picture made me laugh so hard i couldn't breathe!!!
Not to be a grammar Nazi or anything, but the reason I couldn't figure out what 'it' was is because of the lack of comma.
The sentence itself was confusing me so I was trying to make it make sense, which made me not think of that specific word. It took til I finally got to her saying she'll get it.