Earth, Fire, Wind, Water, Heart.
These are the five elements needed to summon the environment's greatest champion: Captain Planet.
When Twilight Sparkle decides to summon this hero to aid in her cause, she didn't count on one teensy hiccup: he appears to suffer a mild case of hippophobia, a fear of equines.
Will hilarity ensue? Or am I just not funny. You, dear reader, are about to find out.
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A Captain Planet and MLP crossover? Oh you gotta be kidding me. Seems interesting though.
Will read later
I haven't read it yet, but I am voting for not funny, you never know though....
MA-TI. HEART.
That being said, i will probably ne'er read this.
Verb tense issues everywhere.
But a very good story.
1265214 You again...
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I read the first section. I'll admit, I chuckled a bit when Captain Planet noticed his surroundings. But...
The first several paragraphs seemed to jump back and forth in time a bit, which can be confusing. Also, you need to decide if the story is being told in a past or present tense form. It doesn't seem like this story would be too bad, but I don't have time to read the whole thing now.
I just scrolled up and scanned through Twilight's letter to Celestia.
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I'm out... good luck with this.
I'm going to sit over here and wait...
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Molestia strikes again
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Ummm...
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1265597 Judging from this, I know you...
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I followed this link expecting greatness. Alas, it appears that "Pinkamena, The Pink Shadow" has suffered a nuclear holocaust. No story, no comments. I'm going to return to the corner and quietly sob to myself now.
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I bid your Robot Chicken, and raise you a SexualLobster!
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Whelp, that's a crushing blow to my self esteem. But thanks for pointing out what I did wrong. If you haven't guessed yet, it's my first stab at comedy but as they say, "dying is easy, comedy is hard". I'll probably work on that verb tense problem before I post anything else
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Yeah, this story is kinda inspired by that video
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Okay, I've edited it. Please tell me if there's any other issue I should work on. Any at all. Don't be shy
Hehe, I really like this! Well-done!
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Thanx, dude.
Omg. this was hillarious.
Slightly insulting to Captain Planet, but hillarious.
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wow, didn't think anyone would pay attention to a story this old. Thanx
1619851 I was actually looking to see if anyone had already done a Captain Planet fic cuz i'm planing one. You're welcome though.
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Is yours gonna be a weird comedy like mine or an adventure fic?
1620273 more adventure than anything, but it's gonna be darker than the show.
I'm also considering cutting Captain Planet himself out of it and just having the Pony Planeteers (CMC + Pipsqueak and Rumble).
I'd put captain in, but his pun-filled, cheesy, 90's superhero goodness might ruin the darker feel of the story.
Then again, it just wouldn't be quite the same without those puns either.
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Yeah.... My Captain Planet's OOC because I haven't seen that show in a while.
Well, you could give him a Captain America persona. Good values minus the cheesy puns.
1623539 nah. With Captain Planet just isn't Captain Planet without the puns. Really it's just a question of "Can I make him serious enough for the fic without removing the puns, or would he just throw the whole mood of the story out the window?".
It's also a question of "can i think of enough puns for him?" as well as "do i really want to make up a new super enemy everytime i throw captain planet into a chapter?"
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To the latter question: why not?
the guy who wrote My Little Megas XLR always made a new villain every chapter and he still sticks with the essence
1623824 It's a pain and a hassle, not to mention i already have to try and come up with environment related crimes and villains every chapter (and this is a world full of ponies mind you, where the pegasi control the weather), as well as interpersonal problems betweent the characters; throwing in a captain planet reqired problem and comming up with all the puns i'd need on top of all that...it's a lot of work.
And i have to do it all without bashing people over the head with messages like "Recycle" or "use solar power" less everyone gets sick of the eco friendly messages and stop reading it.
but like i said, I'm still on the fence about the captain.
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Well, I wish you the best of luck
1624683 thank you.