• Published 11th Apr 2021
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Sunset and Nia - Lawton

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The end

That night,Twilight and Sunset were at the hospital while Thomas and Nia were at the Steamworks.Both the ponies and steamies came to see them.Twilight,Sunset,Thomas,And Nia woke up seeing their friends.

“Twilight?” Starlight asked.

“Spike?Starlight?” Twilight asked quietly.

“Sunset,We were wrong to scold at you and Nia.” Sobbed Starlight.“I....I was wrong.”

“That Diesel lied to us this whole time.” Sobbed Rainbow Dash angrily.

“We just wanna say we’re real sorry.” Said Applejack holding her hat on her chest.

“I simply ant believe that Diesel is nothing.But,A big brute!” Said Rarity sadly.

“We feel awful.” Said Fluttershy.

“He’s totally crazy!” Screamed Pinkie Pie.

“You tied to tell us at the sheds.But,We didn’t listen.” Said Edward.

“I still can’t forgive those diesels for wrecking our friends.” Said Gordon.

“It is all our fault.” Said Henry.

“No way that Diesel can tear us apart!” Said James.

“We’re Sorry for everything we’ve done wrong ever since Diesel came.” Sid Rebecca sadly.

“Twilight,......” Said Spike.

“Thomas,......” Said Percy.

“Will you forgive us?” The two asked.

“Yes.We do.” Smiled Twilight and Thomas.The ponies had a group hug and the engines whistled happily.Soon,Twilight,Thomas,Sunset,And Nia were as good as new and were back on track.And with Diesel gone,Everyone will now continue their friendship on the island of Sodor to be really useful friends.

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Comments ( 46 )

Is this supposed to be nonsensical?

10764835
I know how a diesel electric locomotive works. But diesel locos are fitted with gearing to regulate their speed and prevent damage to the generators. If Diesel et al attempted what was depicted here, they would burn out their resistors. Shunters are not designed for high speed; they are designed to produce high levels of power over short periods, which is crucial for shunting.

10764853
It's like you don't want help to improve. Cheerio!

10764862
Ok.Here.Maybe I can make them stop pushing Nia before they fell over the edge or they use some sort of super fuel making them go faster.Are you happy now?

10764877
Or swap Diesel et al for faster characters, like D199 or Bowler.

10764947
Bowler?You mean that diesel who got the inspectors hat stuck in his air tank?Also,I could use a better name than D199.

10764955
Well, air intake, but yes. D199...how about Spam Can?

10764974
How about Lucas

10765019
The tankers carry crude oil, as indicated by their markings. Crude oil is a highly complex substance consisting of multiple different hydrocarbons and a boiling point of 200 degrees Celcius (392 degrees Fahrenheit). It would burn (eventually), but not explode in the manner depicted here.

10765047
What made you say that?The tankers in the story are filled with explosive fuel like car gas?Thats explosive.

10765051
Fires need a spark and oxygen. It states the tankers fell into water, which would prevent a spark from ocurring. Petrol doesn't behave the way it does in Hollywood the way it does in real life.

10765054
They fell on some of the rocks that are not in the water

10765156
That's not enough to produce a spark.

10765290
Let’s say the cliff is really high up from the rocks

10765487
Right. And a campfire is below.

10765598
Campfire?the rocky surface is to bumpy no the tankers is thicker than you think.Takes more then a cmo fire to blow up a bunch of fuel surrounded by a thick layer of metal.What I’m saying is the harder they fall,The more impactful force there is to blow up the fuel.

10765612
Physics dictates otherwise. Tankers are also designed to survive heavy impacts.

10765598
Wait!What rock can be hard enough to Pearce metal

10765748
It can bend it, yes. But tankers are designed to survive heavy impacts. It's why tanker wagons have that cigar shape.

10766104
Wait!Wait!Wait!Are you trying to think this story is just like in the real world if it is?

10766348
Thomas and Friends is what is termed a 'realistic fictional story setting'. Yes, the engines talk, but it's ultimately still set in the real world, one that obeys all the rules and laws of ours.

But I make this the way I like it even though it is realistic fictional

I don’t understand.My photos were in the story a few days ago.Now they are gone

10766402

10767345
They've been gone for a while

10767909
But why?I know how to put photos into the story

10767935
There's a known issue with upstream errors.

10767975
I wish that issue never existed

10769870
Same, but we'll have to live with it.

10770661
There's not much Knighty can do.

10771022
The guy who created this website.

10771075
Isn’t there a way for the photos to stay in the story

10779892
Where can I find one of those

10824638
No, short for moderator.

10824651
What’s a moderator

10825761
Moderators are the people who oversee the website and ensure rules are followed. It astonishes me that you don't know this.

10825781
It is true that youtubers use keep other YouTube ideas by using disclaimers to keep their channels alive.

10825784
I'm not sure how that is relevant.

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