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it's not necessary to use scribbles in fictions... maybe some work but for you... not good enough.... some of the parts were interesting... though a little bit... but not a lot.... maybe in the future chapters... But some people just don't finished them so... if you finished maybe it may be good later??? but, it's all on you though.
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that's a good critiqe you just made, I'll be sure of that, and I'm trying not to rush the story, like what I did with the black sign.