This story takes place during the episode "hearths warming eve," but in the same universe as A recording of a missing pony
A sorcerer finds 3 ancient temples when she was exiled from his home, but little did he know, is that he has fallen into a dangerouse trap.
This fic is inspired by hp lovecraft.
Cover art collored by "Razor blade the unicorn"
Not bad, I'm a fan of Lovecraft too.
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