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Pulling the Strings

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Exuno

Exuno #1 · May 19th, 2021 · · ·

I really really liked this. The set up is a bit contrived, but there's no problem if it helps get to the smut properly like this. I've got a real kink for being dumb and horny – orgasm denial specifically isn't always my thing, but just having all her agency and higher functions stripped away by Velvet's selfishness (and her own impudence) is extremely hot and I'm very jealous of... Leaf (lol i had to look up her name and it only gets mentioned once ever, that's kinda hot too).

I feel like this is probably all you planned on, but I'm holding out how that Incomplete status wasn't a mistake – she's definitely a keeper and I wanna see her get tormented more. Or, well, Velvet do this kinda thing to anypony, that would work too.

BlueRiddle

BlueRiddle #2 · May 19th, 2021 · · ·

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The acquisition and torment of cuties is this stallion's specialty.

So no worries! I will certainly get around to at least one or two more chapters, maybe more, depending on whether or not more ideas come while writing.