Recover Crystal Heart? Yes. Slay Sombra? Yes. Become the new King? Ye- wait what?!
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Welcome back, and great chapter! I continue to enjoy the story and am really looking forward both to delving both into Sombra's past as well as our heroes romantic future.
It was clear that she was one of those faithful cultists that was willing to go through great lengths to make sure
hisher ‘friend’ was brought back. - you are referencing Radiant Hope.I swear there most be a trope or a phrase to refer 'having the hots for your boss' but heaves know I don't know it. I suppose it was the classic hero syndrome. You save her from a tyrant, gave her a job, responsibilities and with it the pride of been in charge of a legion of maids, and free his brother.
Yeah it pretty natural developing feelings for the guy that did so much for you AND have a sensitive side to booth by adopting a kid and be a good father to him. Yeah he got her good, and boy she wants romance too, she is head over heels in love.
Honestly I will be surprise if there isn't a fan club dedicate to him brewing in the near future…and a more risque fan club of all mares REAAALLY liking him (if you know what I mean) I wonder in which one Apocrypha will be a part of
Oh Cadence is so going to tell him once she hears it.
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There is also a reason why she went quite bold and... it's hilarious. And quite concerning from the MC when he realizes the 'source' of these ideas.
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I'm fearing Cadence is involve somehow but we will have to wait and see
Finally a story that follows the Umbrum route and not the "oh Sombra was corrupted by dark magic" route.
This entire saga in the MLP comics was amazing and it's a shame the series didn't do anything with it, instead choosing to make Sombra an egomaniac. Seriously..I love the show but season 10 did not so justice to Sombra or Tirek.
Ps,wanna see justice for Tirek, watch MLP meets Sailor Moon part 1...when Discord had Tirek flashbacks...SWEET CELESTIA...The instrumental metal version of Hellfire was ana amazing choice.
I’m impressed she went through the trouble with the petals.
Oh?
If memory serves, she was friends with him before and is blind to his faults.
I suppose that's fair.
Sounds about right.
What are you planning?
Both?
Oh really? How so?
Bullshit.
Yep.
You're not very convincing.
Fair enough.
Dude, just bang her. Give the girl a thrill. We all have fantasies and it don't kill anyone to help out.
Unless your character is like the other 14,000 sexually phobic, kiss phobic and touch phobic main characters on this site.
Which really is ridiculous. Look guys, I know we're a bunch of introverted shut ins, but can't we write at least a few sexually healthy characters?
Monk
I can't be the only one who has noticed this.
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Ah he is her boss dude. And is consider of her feelings, plus HR will SO not gonna love that if they hear that.
Yeah they even exist in fantasy word, they are like the IRS, they are everywhere
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She was helping him clean his pipes.
Technically he is the king, so if you look at it like that, then he can't bang anyone in his entire country because he is basically everybody's boss. He can't bang anyone who visits either.
So basically the only times he can legally have sex is when he leaves the country and only with foreigners.
Monk
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That is different, he rules his people but the staff work for him. It like if the president of the unite states saying he is the head manager of every single Macdonals in the nation, he rules over them but he doesn't exactly work with them.
So technically speaking he could date her. I'm just saying it will be like a romance in the workplace because they work closely, also cleaning his pipes? Oh she doubles as a plummer too? that is so consider of her. She deserve a reward, and it needs to be proper, he is not a cave man either.
A casual invitation to dinner, some walking under the nightsky, maybe some dancing and then he takes her to his place. And he is the king so you know what means, keep her prepare and two orgasm minimum to the lady before diving in. Like any gentleman would do.
That is the laaaaaw of the west
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Thanks again Jbukharin for another great chapter. Loved the dialog and found the final scene with Cinnamon quite funny. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
Ohh. Heat season is coming.
"A magical leak? At this time of year! At this time of day! In this part of the empire! Localized entirely within my bedroom?!?"
"Yes"
".....May I see it?"
"Anytime you want, stud."
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*Cue Careless Whisper*
Well, this certainly is... interesting. You have my curiosity. Please, continue.
Reading through the story again after looking into EAW a bit, I couldn't help but notice that the description of Cinnamon Velvet is basically Rosa Maledicta in a maid uniform, down to the haircut.
Which is something I can honestly say I didn't know I needed until now. I don't know what sort of dark and terrible bargain one would need to make to have that illustrated, but I really want to see it now.
Not sure if a good thing he hasn't given the head pats, but that's two mares now that have given hints (that we know of).
Too bad about the Umbrum though. Wish there was a way to get them productive.
Maybe Apocrita will try to woo him next?
This story is so cool. I hope for more tiny bat pony adorableness.
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Uh . . . One other problem. . . Cinnamon is also a horse (well technically a pony but eh). I don’t think ol John here is interested in that flank.
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Nope but well eventually we all go native after leaving someplace long enough
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And it's not like he has other human options.
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Let me sincerely ask you a question then: what options does he truly have for a human courtship?
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Himself.....lol jk
I just realized that this world is set in the Equestria At War universe, lmao. It's real great how you incorporate the characters into a great storyline.
Did Twilight ever leave or is she just holed up in that library?