Recover Crystal Heart? Yes. Slay Sombra? Yes. Become the new King? Ye- wait what?!
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while both methords of lerning have their merits they also have their downfalls
EVERYONE wants him, good lord...
Ok so Luna is getting…possesive of the human? And now she is plotting to arrange a marriage so he marries one of her Thestrals or a mare she hoof pick herself?
Things are getting a game of throne vibe now, without the incest thing.
Also, looks like Celestia still has the bad habit of snoping on her room. Like I say in a comment before, enchant some some boobie traps. Let see how much she wants to snoop when she leave the room cover in that blue ink the bankers used for bankrobbers
Plots within plots it seems.
Thanks again Jbukharin for another couple of amazing chapters. I was afraid to see such an great story die off but It's nice to see it's not been abandoned. I really love the story concept of a character, SI or OC, takeover of the Crystal Empire after defeating Sombra rather than the usual Cannon with Cadence taking over. Thus far the OC's you made such as the New changeling queen ect. are really fun to read and I'm excited to see how their characters develop later on in the story. I'm also excited to see Luna's character develop a bit more with the whole Financial section you wrote about in this chapter and love to see more like it with Luna and other know Characters. Also, I loved the image of Nightmare Woonah and hope we get to see more of her and cuddles in the future in the future. Thanks again for all the hard work Jbukharin you put into this story and I wish you the best of luck with the next instalment to this story. Cheers!!!
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wait who else except maid and queen changelings?
marriage Huh
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I'm pretty sure that she's the one she's trying to arrange him to marry. She clearly has a crush on him after all, and Celestia went all "teasing my little sister about her love-life" at the end there.
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One would think that, until they remember when Cadence call on them exactly for the same reason and they laugh it off, saying that is absolutely totally not that case and they are just very good friends. Even the author confirmed. So that is why I belived she is pushing something for him to married a student of hers like Moondancer or something
I Neeeed more, loving this development!
This confused me for several minutes before realising what it meant.
Man I suck at reading sometimes.
Thoroughly enjoying the story, as always!
Luna, mistress of the night. Interesting machinations being built up. Wonder how grandiose the mousetrap will be...
Can't say I didn't expect this
Just binge-read this entire story and I liked it alot. Not enough Equestria at War stories in this site, in my opnion.
I am interested in what exactly John's political beliefs are. So far he has been a pragmatic despotist with a center-left economic doctrine, but beyond this we know little about his beliefs or how he plan to eventually structure the Crystal government.
How will the bureaucracy be appointed? Will he let the outer regions of the Empire be ruled by elected locals, local nobles or appointed governors? What are his opinions on the rural nobility? Will he try to gather their support or perhaps encourage a more meritocratic system? Will he try to implement an elected representative chamber or try to consolidate power as an absolutist monarch? How will he handle the brewing succession crisis?
Also, there were alot of talk about the communists to the East and about containing the spread of their ideology on the Crystal Empire, but what about the republicans? Sure, the republican revolution on the Griffonian continent is very far away, but Nova Griffonia is not and they harbor alot of republicans. Considering John is a monarch, republicanism would be a threat to his power.
I'm looking forward for more chapters! John must give more pets!
Just read a few chapters.
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American English is not your native language, is it?
The sentence structure, and some of the word choices, make that clear.
Still... I love the fic!^_^ Even if it is hard to figure out what some of them mean with what they say.
Looking forward to seeing more of this story whenever it gets out.
Back to the shadow box with this one as I wait months for the update
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An update will come soon, my writing schedule is being quite cruel these months.
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You are the first writer to reply not only within the same day but also with an update coming. I thank you
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You'd be surprised at how many non-native English speakers roaming around fimfic. In fact, the reason why a lot of fanfics have terrible English yet still managing loads of upvotes is because us non-native English speakers have much more tolerance against that sort of problems. Our brains are trained to translate English to our native language as fast as possible, which means entirely ignoring most of the problems since it will be perfectly legible in our heads once we internally translate it anyways.
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From what I'm seeing in this 2nd re-read, John seems to mostly not adhere to any certain ideology. He tries to pick what would work best for Crystal Empire from every ideology in his disposal and apply it carefully yet aggressively. He's not exactly placeable in the regular political axis, but I can say he's mostly a monarchist progressive reformist. Paradoxical since monarchy is an absolute form of right-wing while progressivism and reformism are left-leaning, I know, but he mostly seem like a benevolent dictator that genuinely uses his power to grow the empire with the people in mind, and his biases and understanding of our world's politics has him not interfere too much in internal affairs that doesn't need fixing.
It might be weird, but I find that his overall social ideology seems to be some sort of a modified maternalism that focuses on nurturing and letting the people grow.
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Yeah I got that sense too that he was creating a "realist" state that beholds itself to no ideology, but rather the simple premise of "because it's the best/right thing to do in this situation." Ultimately Cautious Optimism and/or Optimistic Pessimism made manifest as a nation.
:)