Recover Crystal Heart? Yes. Slay Sombra? Yes. Become the new King? Ye- wait what?!
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John, going full godfather
You come into my house, and insult me and mine?
Nice
That last paragraph before the bolded text was confusing. It seemed tangled, so please straighten it out a bit. The rest of the chapter was pretty good though. I liked the bit with the 'protagonist knowing more than one language' being useful in the day-to-day rather than as a plot device to solve some ancient riddle.
Maybe you should add some more punctuation to that paragraph I mentioned, or maybe split it into more sentences. It's hard to parse right now, for me.
They say it loosens lips. Well, isn't that something.
King John, making a name for himself! Spread that discord and ruffle feathers! š
Gotta love the shock one can inflict when you know the local's language and can answer in the same fashion!
Thanks again JBukharin for another great chapter. I enjoyed a lot of the dialog this chapter, like with pinky pie, as well as the confrontation between John and the Griffon. I'm also enjoying seeing Silver's character getting some more development and have to say he becoming quite adorable. I'm quite excited to see where the plot takes us next chapter with John and Luna and wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter. Thanks again for all the hard work you put into making such interesting stories for us to read and I wish you a happy new year!
oh boy I hope Beakolini gets Sidelined by the King
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You're breaking your mother's heart!
Oh my godā¦he kiss Celestia didn't he? Wait was that a kiss or some italian form of saying goodbye? because I once heard in Italy is custome to kiss both cheeks as a form of greeting (or was goodbye?) but I don't know if that continues to be the case. Do they do that?
Boy Cadence is gonna a have a field day! Just when he get rid of her trying to match him up with Luna NOW she is gonna a tried to do the same but with Celestia.
John can't simply take a break can't he?
Do it your goddamn self then
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It was funnier to see it unfold while eating cake.
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Birb was lucky he didn't make him an offer he couldn't refuse.
We need more Pinkie--
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Kek
I still find it surprising with the direction the story seems to be going that there isn't a 'romance' tag
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I had reached the genre tag cap when I first created the page, couldn't put it. xD
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In that case works for me!
ooooh great chapter!!!
keep it up!!!
I really enjoyed the ride up till now. Can't wait to see where it leads on to.
But if the chapters are "only" aroun 3-4 k I might wait till there are a few chapters again.
Otherwise I think the suspense will plain kill me
i can't wait for the next chapter
New chapter coming this Monday.