Beatrix, Oona and friends journey through the Lost World to find and rescue her daughter, Abadonna. They come across some new and familiar faces, as well as some old enemies. Who will reach the sacred library in time?
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Another incredible chapter! Loved all the scenes that you two did.
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Thank you!
nice work once again!
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Thanks!
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You're welcome!
1) Wait. There are cars in this realm??
2) Given how much Oona has gone around, I'm surprised that she hasn't fallen in love with someone besides Beatrix by now, even with Midnight.
3) Did you mean "rune"? That aside, I hope Oona can help Cerise feel truly loved and bear children for Midnight. As for Oona herself, she deserves to have someone to love like Midnight and Beatrix after living her entire life in singlehood. I'm also sure she would love to have a Pony-Sheep hybrid child.
4) The "Might makes Right" policy is never good on its own.
5) One cannot be rid of all mortal weaknesses. If she continues to have her deepest desires forcibly suppressed, it will rebound harder every time, eventually driving her insane. If she wants love and affection that badly, Beatrix could give her exactly that. What she thinks she wants in her life is nothing more than trying to fill a bottomless cup. She will never get enough of it until she get knocked back to her senses.
6) If this is Act 1, you might want to label your chapters under their respective acts accordingly.
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Rebounding has definitely been Shadow Scythe's arc so far thanks to her stubborn pride and fear she'd lose her identity if she ever compromises. Although I think her letting Zeloph touch and heal her is a big step in the right direction.
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After how Zeloph nearly destroyed a universe to "purify" it, can we even trust him anymore?
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1) Actually, yes. The Lost World is pretty closely linked to the human realm.
2) Oona never used to be this direct and 'intimate' with people until she met Beatrix. Also, I normally don't dwell into this, but i'mma take a page out of Shadic's book. A union between Midnight and Oona would be possible in the marriage sense, given that he's now a prince and she's the chieftain's daughter. Unlikely to happen, but interesting to think about.
3) Damnit! And yes, I'm sure she would~
4) Hence why Dion is likely to not return home for a while. He'll need to resolve issues without picking a fight with everything.
5) Ahh, I love the 'cup' metaphor so much.
6) I could, but the chapters would be very messy and full given this story has titles. I sorta threw Act 1 in to signify the end of the first multi-parter. There will be a couple more chapters like this one!
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Probably not, but I do like Shadow Scythe opening up to a fellow monster. Perhaps they can help redeem each other? Though there's always a risk they'll bring out the worst in them, too!
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2) Wait, who's Shadic?
3) Oh ho, did I just flip your "Idea Switch"???😜
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2) Shadic Midnight Blitzer, one of our other commenters here and Midnight's author
3) Who said my switch was ever off?
As for Shadow opening a bit to Zeloph, definietly risky. But Shadow also tried causing mass genocide herself. Plus, she has a habit of backstabbing anyone close to her, which Zeloph has not taken kindly to previously. It's a complicated relationship that could potentially save them or damn them further.
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2) Oh, him. Sorry.
3) Not only can Oona finally have a husband to love, cherish and bear children with should she grow to love Midnight, but also have Cerise, Beatrix, and Moonlight to love as family and lovers, and she will be the third of many, many, MANY wives to come to help sate his needs, whenever they may kick in.
As for your analysis of Shadow and Zeloph's relationship, that's what I hate about wielding double-edged swords, and this is coming from someone who prefers staff weapons!
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Did somebody summon me?
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Have you've summoned me?