Beatrix, Oona and friends journey through the Lost World to find and rescue her daughter, Abadonna. They come across some new and familiar faces, as well as some old enemies. Who will reach the sacred library in time?
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nice work! Something i noticed
Space?
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Yeah, sometimes an error or two slips through. No ones perfect cx
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Of course.
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Great chapter! This Ambros is a connection to your FoE story I presume?
I really hope that when the time comes that the two sides will forget their grudges and unite against the common enemy known as the Burning King. Sure, some type of punishment might end up being needed against Zeloph and Shadow, but it's clear that they're not the total evils they were.
Doppia means trouble though. Hopefully there's a way to free her from the Burning King's mark as well as Shadow and Zeloph.
I hope that there's a way for Midnight to expand his age again, cause even if they make a foal after Lightendark, it's really unfair that Midnight would die probably before their foals fully mature or reach the age of 20. Not to mention not being able to see grandkids.
Hopefully Midnight doesn't let his blind anti-changeling fanaticalism get in the way of their objective. Changeling go boom boom.
Poor Cerise and her nightmares about Midnight's early death. She's not the only one though with Beatrix also having those dreams.
Also pretty sad the fate of Shining and Cadence. I couldn't help but laugh a little at Cadence wanting Midnight to bonk Beatrix. Reminded me of when Beatrix romped with her father in Force 2. I wouldn't be surprised that if Cerise hadnt entered the Manor, Beatrix would've done the same act with Midnight before realizing that he was her half brother.
It seems everybody isn't able to fully trust each other after last chapter. Hopefully the bonds can be fixed before the fight begins. United they stand but seperate they shall fall.
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As it was stated in the last chapter, yes.
Everyone seems to have meaningful dreams except MIdnight and Dion themselves. Hmm...
I would call the situation with Cadance and Shining Armor anything but funny.
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- Hmmm. Yeah I wonder. In due time maybe? But then again who knows if Midnight will have any 'out of the ordinary' dream. Same for Dion.
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Thanks for commenting as always, hope you like the direction for Midnight so far! Very different from the ones seen in your fics but with a similar core I hope!
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Changeling go boom boom lol
1) Yeesh. What insanity would drive one of the arguably most noble couples in Canon to join the Caribou in their depraved activities!?
2) Ok, this is just condescending at this point. He thinks women should be treated as nothing more than property and sex toys, yet doesn't do the same to his wife??
3) She's either going to pose as Cerise, or she's going to use her as a puppet. I have this nagging feeling that her scheme doesn't involve The Burning King.
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1) My theory is that in this universe, they were always awful, and the caribou happen to be at the right moment in time.
2) No, he would. She's just locked in the other cage.
3) Oh, it doesnt~ 😈
Surprised no one has mentioned the strong theme of fathers in this chapter. I thought it was pretty cool :p
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I know that in the original Fall of Equestria timeline Shining Armor and Cadance were traitors, so most who've used the idea kept to that plotline. Not sure if it was explained there why they betrayed though, since I like those two like Beatrix I want to believe there was some outside corruption.