Beatrix, Oona and friends journey through the Lost World to find and rescue her daughter, Abadonna. They come across some new and familiar faces, as well as some old enemies. Who will reach the sacred library in time?
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Lovely! So, next time, better not trigger Blitzer's "battle rage", so to speak
Huh. This story is getting more and more interesting. Yeah. Midnight really needs to train if he wants to prove himself or at least control himself. Hopefully he and the rest can survive this world!
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Yep, he's a handful!
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Hope we portrayed Midnight and Moonlight well!
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Mhm
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Yeah, you two did well!
1) It seems that Midnight has some unchecked issues associated with his primal instincts. If he has this repressed desire to succeed at all costs, then he will need to learn to accept failure, lest he starts killing innocents in this wild goose chase for glory.
2) Sounds like Midnight's herd is going to grow much bigger. If anything, he will need permanent concubines, assuming multiple wives are technically not allowed in his home.
3) Now the race to find Abadonna is in full swing, but now Beatrix has 2 people who are out for her blood. I know that Beatrix has caused collateral damage during her multiversal adventures, but at the end of the day, is Shadow Scythe's contempt for her really rational at all?
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Whenever you're free, you can rectify your text errors.
Even proofreaders need proofreaders.
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On a side note, so glad to have you back and reviewing our work! c:
1) Self Acceptance is a big theme in this story!
2) Hyper-stallions be a whole lot to handle, so Midnight will much appreciate the extra hands, mouths, and orifices. Sharaz really has a thing for harems
3) Good Question. The same can be said for Zeloph's grudge against her, as he's a little more self-aware. It's just hard to accept fault when you're wounded
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I was debating on whether to read this story, but decided to do so anyway to save me the suspense from the last installment.
Given the main point of this story, would it make Abadonna a living Macguffin?
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In a way, yes. Her birth ensures many wondrous things will happen.
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Don't I know it
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"Wondrous things"? I'm not so sure about that, considering that she's behaving like an anomaly in Space and Time right now. She's already badly glitching in and out of existence as it is, so I don't know if she can hold on for much longer.
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Reality is trying to ‘correct’ her existence as she wasn’t suppose to be born yet, hence why Enoch’s library was the only place she could materialize. There’s a reason to why that is.