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Awesome cover! Thanks for working with me like always!
Oh yes, love the beginning with Abadonna and Enock, as well as the moment between Dion and Beatrix and Shadow Scythe looking quite distasteful towards Beatrix as usual. Can't wait for when this continues!
Yes, if this was an anime, I'd watch it.
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Indeed, some parts are almost lighthearted but hint at the dramatics to follow.
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Funny enough, I listened to a lot of Attack on Titan's OST for the giant scene. Was quite fun
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Loved it. Again, this would be pretty much an anime I'd watch multiple times if it existed
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Good choice! Want to catch back up with the series as I haven't watched past season 3 yet.
certainly interesting, eager to see how this goes
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Do it. The first half is a change of pace, but we get back to the action in the latter. It's very satisfying.
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Definitely sounds intriguing, love what they've done with Reiner over the series!
nice work!
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
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Much appreciate.
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You're welcome!
Moxxi being moxxi, comparing Zeloph's Halo to a condom.
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It was more of a metaphor, but she defiantly would use a halo for naughty ideas~
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Oh dear
What's a Onoma again?
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Onoma is the name of one’s arcane magic specific to the person, named after Greek gods and words. For example, Erebus (Beatrix’s signature) is manipulative cosmic magic she can wield into anything she can think up, a sword and tendrils so far.
Nice to see another chapter up!
I am particularly picky when it comes to my post dates, otherwise it would be up sooner!
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Alright! Nice chapter! I love the possibility/threat of Shadow Scythe getting arcane magic as well! Can't wait! Shadow won the first bout (by killing Beatrix), Beatrix won the second bout (by Shadow losing her identity), can't wait to see who'll win a 1v1 between them, or if they'll need backup from their respective sides to win
Nice job, as always!
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Shadow Scythe is always fun to write!
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Thanks!
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Agreed! Fun! Very fun!
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You're welcome!
Lovely! So, next time, better not trigger Blitzer's "battle rage", so to speak
Huh. This story is getting more and more interesting. Yeah. Midnight really needs to train if he wants to prove himself or at least control himself. Hopefully he and the rest can survive this world!
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Yep, he's a handful!
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Hope we portrayed Midnight and Moonlight well!
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Mhm
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Yeah, you two did well!
Don't you mean "with little detection"?
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Ah... Good eye
1) It seems that Midnight has some unchecked issues associated with his primal instincts. If he has this repressed desire to succeed at all costs, then he will need to learn to accept failure, lest he starts killing innocents in this wild goose chase for glory.
2) Sounds like Midnight's herd is going to grow much bigger. If anything, he will need permanent concubines, assuming multiple wives are technically not allowed in his home.
3) Now the race to find Abadonna is in full swing, but now Beatrix has 2 people who are out for her blood. I know that Beatrix has caused collateral damage during her multiversal adventures, but at the end of the day, is Shadow Scythe's contempt for her really rational at all?
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Whenever you're free, you can rectify your text errors.
Even proofreaders need proofreaders.
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On a side note, so glad to have you back and reviewing our work! c:
1) Self Acceptance is a big theme in this story!
2) Hyper-stallions be a whole lot to handle, so Midnight will much appreciate the extra hands, mouths, and orifices. Sharaz really has a thing for harems
3) Good Question. The same can be said for Zeloph's grudge against her, as he's a little more self-aware. It's just hard to accept fault when you're wounded
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I was debating on whether to read this story, but decided to do so anyway to save me the suspense from the last installment.
Given the main point of this story, would it make Abadonna a living Macguffin?
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In a way, yes. Her birth ensures many wondrous things will happen.
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Don't I know it
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"Wondrous things"? I'm not so sure about that, considering that she's behaving like an anomaly in Space and Time right now. She's already badly glitching in and out of existence as it is, so I don't know if she can hold on for much longer.
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Reality is trying to ‘correct’ her existence as she wasn’t suppose to be born yet, hence why Enoch’s library was the only place she could materialize. There’s a reason to why that is.
I have sen worse in gore. NIce work, as always!
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This is a more action/lighthearted story, so the sudden shift in violence I feel warrants the warning.
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Of course.
The King is so powerful that apparently the rest of the text turned bold and we saw a 'b'
The Omega Prophecy sounds so interesting. Of course, Madame didn't mind making a very nice proposition to Zeloph. Wonder what the hair is going to be used for, who'll it'll be plucked from, etc.
"Ah. So this is why you said it was too dangerous for me?" Midnight asks turning to Beatrix. "I guess there's no point taking a step back now that I'm here."
1) So the Burning King is just an omnicidal maniac who wants to end all existence. What will he do when he runs out of lives to take?
2) Is this realm a hellish survival free for all, where only the Burning King can fend the monsters off? Zeloph and Shadow Scythe were overwhelmed far too quickly.
3) The purest Alicorn could be Twilight, Cadence, or Flurry Heart, but they won't be happy to bleed for a senseless prophecy.
4) Who is the true evil now? Zeloph, or the Burning King?