Beatrix, Oona and friends journey through the Lost World to find and rescue her daughter, Abadonna. They come across some new and familiar faces, as well as some old enemies. Who will reach the sacred library in time?
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good joke with the jail
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I like sprinkling memes and references here and there
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mhm
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*bonk bonk*
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Like Mini-Trix and Zeloph bonking horny characters.
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ah, okay, now you gave me a stupid thought
Oh no, so the original host was never removed from her body!? That's a big problem.
Did you mean "a've ah"? Also, not now, Dion!
I now imagine everyone's language getting censored by a text-to-speech voice.🤣
I kind of feel sorry for Shadow here. Maybe one day, she will finally have a large pair of knockers she can truly call hers.
Oh, God. She's a masochist, isn't she?
Wait, so Bellatrix has bonded with an Eldritch? That's awesome!😃
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1. Correct! Cerise has a lot more to handle if she wants to take down Doppia.
3. Honestly, me too
4. Perhaps Beatrix could teach her some of that special alchemy
5. She’s a lot of things, trust me~
6. I’m not sure the mansion is directly related to the eldritch, but it’s quite the beast!
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The mansion is an eldritch abomination in disguise that is believed to have escaped from the Necronomicon, and Bellatrix is indeed bonded to it. (Only a powerful demon can sustain it for long.)
Ok let's just start off from the beginning. I guess if I was in Cerise's shoes I'd be pretty terrified hearing that I had another soul that might end up overpowering me and given how she (or I in this example) just lost my original body, pretty traumatizing. Thankfully she was able to quickly recover from the shock. It's nice that Zeloph and Shadow are quickly making amends with Cerise.
Also Moxxi complaining about the censorship is pretty hilarious. BTW who'd disappear first, Mini Trix or a lewd object. Say they're fighting a tentacle that initially starts off as non-lewd and then after grabbing everyone it suddenly goes into horny mode. Would she disappear, override the mode so that it's still just a regular fight, die, or make the tentacle monster disappear?
The pool scene with the girls reminded me of two of Telepurte videos 'Jiggle Jiggle Jiggle' and 'Flat is Justice'. Don't worry Shadow! Just listen to what Moxxi said and you know that no matter the size somebody is still having your eyes on you!
Now where to start with the trio's conversation? Because this is honestly the highlight of the chapter for me because it hits so hard so many times. Every moment in both this and the entire series is so good.
First off I like how Zeloph is helping Midnight here, it's pretty incredible that just a few days ago they were on opposite sides and now they're doing their best to put aside their differences and being friendly! Now going onto the next sentences though? Oh god they're so funny! And it's so true! NNN Midnight might be a top military personnel in that AU, but that's because he's the only one who puts enough effort into his work! To be fair he had tried some neurotoxin training, but he hadn't done much else with his wings...
Wait... I don't know if I proposed this idea before (it'd be a very long time ago if I did) but... are we going to see some Wind Blades soon!? (Or just a simple shockwave of air like what RIZ Midnight used)
Also NNN Is pretty naive/not very bright. Like come on NNN! You should know that Moonlight has been hitting on you for years now! You had clones of Rainbow Dash chase after you and yet you never bothered to ask why this is happening in the first place!? BRU-
I love that when Zeloph is saying 'and the sad thing is that he actually thinks he's funny' it totally reminds me of when I used to post memes in the comments section. Whether it was referencing that phase I had or not idk but I still loved it.
Loved when Midnight yelled 'WHAT!?' when they said he wasn't 'alpha material' and well he really isn't. Midnight didn't even know that he could attract mares, and even less knew about confidence. And yeah, Zeloph has a point. It's usually mares like Moonlight, the Zebra Sisters, Ocellus, etc who take the first move rather than Midnight.
Btw this also brings up another question: In my stories Midnight's classified as a Hyper Stallion, yet it's clear that Lightendark's Hyper Stallions are of a different class. That begs the question, are your Hyper Stallions bigger than my take on Hyper Stallions? Cause I usually say Midnight's 1.5x bigger than the average, (the amount he gains obviously increases the bigger the average becomes). If it's true that your Hyper Stallions are bigger than my version, if say Wolf Tamed Midnight was in place of Lightendark, would he be roughly the same size as Dion? Cause it seems like this Hyper Stallion version multiplies the already huge multiplier my Hyper Stallion has.
And if this is the case, this makes Zeloph's connection about Beatrix and Midnight even more funnier. Let's just say that Midnight got a 'minor improvement' to his multiplier just like Beatrix improved her chest by 'just a teensy bit'.
Love how Zeloph says 'Sigma Male' with his glasses only to end up fighting Dion who tries to make him show his own size. Honestly I would get why Zeloph would be so hesitant because all his former glory was now severely reduced as a cherub.
I think after reading each sentence bit by bit, the funniest moment wasn't from the trio's conversation. It's close, but this takes the cake:
Died from laughter, all the build up between the interactions were too much. Shadow Scythe have mercy on my soul! And just when I was revived I instantly died again from the horny jail joke. Hope to see the next chapter's steamy event!
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Mini-Trix would mutate into a different form if the perversion affected her too much, perhaps into a teen Beatrix?
Guessing Midnight isn't too much larger in general, but he kind of 'Hulks out' with his rage? Like he goes from Dion size to Tirek?
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Nani!?
So MIni Trix would basically become the teenage Beatrix we never got to saw right? Wait! STORY POTENTIAL (but only if Mini Trix gets older actually. Maybe she ends up 'dying', everyone cries about it, and then she comes up as Teenage Beatrix. We need name for that)
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Possible, NotaPonyPerson and I have discussed possible story directions, Mini-Trix will play a key role later in this story!
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It'd be fun seeing Mini Trix become older. I wouldn't be surprised that she ends up gaining as much strength as Beatrix has but towards illusions.
Imagine if she ends up creating a Mini Trix Statue or Plushie to remind herself of the time she was a Mini Trix only for her ability to make it come alive! Now we have three Beatrixs!
"OH GOD THEY'RE MULTIPLYING!"
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Don't think Beatrix would be too happy about having lots of copies! Mini-Trix master illusionist would be cool, though!
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Yep.
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This is probably one of, if not, my most favorite Lightendark chapter in the entire series. Period.
I suppose if this series had been an anime then this would've been the 'beach' episode right lol?
Yeah this chapter brings memories.