Beatrix, Oona and friends journey through the Lost World to find and rescue her daughter, Abadonna. They come across some new and familiar faces, as well as some old enemies. Who will reach the sacred library in time?
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you're mean, i was about to hit the hay because of work. Still, nice work!
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All according to plan
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Fast as always, thanks for reading and commenting!
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okay
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You're welcome
The second major bout is here!
Hope if Abdaonna does what she plans to do, it won't have any repercussions later. There are many routes this can take: will interfering only bring the prophecy closee to it's completion and make it more likely to happen? Or will the survival of the two make it possible to one day have them unite their forces to prevent the prophecy from occuring?
Cause we know that the true threat of the three is Doppia the bringer of the Burning Prophecy, but they don't know that.
Doppia trying to exploit everything she can to make Cerise fall. Again, we know that Beatrix would most likely not marry Midnight, because she's rejected others interested as her eyes are on Oona. But Cerise is more unsure about that. Not to mention that Doppia is trying to make her feel low about herself.
Midnight slowly remembering and his fight with Shining should be interesting to hear. Also laughed a bit when Dion was ruffling his head.
Shadow Scythe sparing is pretty interesting, but at the same time she also has rough history with Beatrix. At the same time though, if she reforms enough, perhaps, perhaps it might convince Beatrix to put her difference aside with Zeloph for a moment and try and give him a chance, but that depends on the fight. Heck, Abadonna calling them out to stop might be the only way they'd even try to look each other in the eye.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Oh shoot. Didn't realize until I refreshed. Great cover!
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Yep, lots of action and build up this time around! Look forward to seeing Midnight and Shining throw down! Poor Cerise can't catch a break!
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Alt Father vs Alt Son Showdown!
Oof for Cerise. She needs all the clout to fight Doppia.
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Whatever Abadonna does (If she can do anything), there will be consequences.
Beatrix is a little peeved at the moment to consider an alliance with her two biggest enemies. And even if she did allowed a truce, she'd never trust either one again.
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Oof
When I picture Oona in an emerald dress, it feels like it might clash with her light blue colour scheme, as good as it may look on her.
Wait. Ponies eat meat in this AU as well??
Yikes. Restoring the Crystal Heart should NOT be worth feeling every second of it.
How did Flurry keep her morals under her parents' depravity?
I hope Midnight doesn't get too carried away, and frankly, I don't know if Shining's treatment of women borders on misogyny. Also, where's Cadance!?
I hope Cerise can finally accomplish something here. Doppia's already using her insecurities and weaknesses against her.
How would she be able to change fate? She hasn't even tried to use her powers yet.
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1. I strongly disagree~
2. Vegan meat c:
3. Radiant here is a tough cookie, that's for sure!
4. She likely hasn't. Nevertheless, the dreadful experience has done a good number to her psyche.
5. Hmmm, you may be right about that. But, on the other hand, something else might be at play here. I wonder what happened to her...
6. Heheh... I think we all know where this is going...
7. Considering that her form is on the verge of fading from existence, trying to use her logic-defying powers wouldn't be a good idea. But losing a patent would definitely motivate her!
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1) You know what? I take it back. It does look good. Don't mean to sound like a pervert here, but shouldn't her breasts be much, much larger like the story describes them?
7) Did you mean "parent"?
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1.) In the end, aren't we all perverts? :P
It may be a bit hard to tell because there's no one else to compare to, but her bust is accurate (maybe a tad smaller than presented). The dress just better accommodates her figure where as Bea and Cerise likely picked smaller gowns to purposefully show off their tits. Maybe I'll do a chart comparison featuring all our leading ladies~
7.) ... Y'know, maybe I'd make a better doctor than a writer.
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7) Whoa, wait! I'm not trying to kill your hobby!😨
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I’m joking, relax
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Yes, Midnight Blitzer asked me for a breast comparison chart before, not certain about NotaPonyPerson's OCs (I'm guessing Lady Ewe is the most voluptuous) but here's our calculations for mine:
Beatrix- DD (Slightly enhanced by alchemy but not enough to alter her cup size)
Cerise- C (Slimmed down from dancing constantly, would have been D or DD otherwise)
Bellatrix- DD+ (She can shapeshift to alter her size)
Twins- D (Foal-Bearer is slightly smaller than Wet Nurse normally, however their heads were switched by Shadow Scythe in the Manor arc when she made them her zombie slaves)
Shadow Scythe- A or low B? (Tall and wispy body, not flat but very small)
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As I said, I'll draw a chart from least to most busty. Maybe during an upcoming chapter, I'll post a link in the author's notes, if the guidelines will allow it :P
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Keep them in bras without nipple indentations and it should be okay? Would love to see it! (If only NSFW pics were allowed!)
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Okay, but since when have we ever allowed any of our characters to wear underwear?
I’ll think of somethin’
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I'll look forward to it!
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I kind of imagined all the girls on the list to be at least a cup size or two bigger, especially Cerise and the Crystal Twins, with the latter's being the size of large melons (No pun intended).
For Oona, from the story's description, I thought her breasts would be at least the size of your average pillow.
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To be fair, I though Beatrix was an E cup due to the enhancements. Oona is an F cup or bigger. Keep in mind, we’re mostly describing breasts with pretty words, as I want to keep some realistic proportions. Doppia’s about a B cup (though bigger than Shadow Scythes) so she has some jiggle while still being slender to dance (like with Cerise)
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Well, it's your story, so I can't judge you for wanting realistic proportions.
Even then, I'm sure there are plenty of stories on this website that contain ridiculously large breasts, to the point that D is the smallest size.
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Yes, Midnight also pictured them much bigger and suggested they're that cup shape by anime standards, which exaggerate proportions.
Like NotaPonyPerson I wanted to keep proportions more 'realistic' as I find disproportionate sizes comical and a turn off, however I tend to try and leave things up to reader imagination so they can fill in their prefered size.
Not an expert on breasts though, while I like all parts of women I'm more of a leg/hips/thighs/ass/girly bits man.
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If it makes you feel better, even I have a limit as to how big I think breasts can be while still looking hot before it becomes ridiculous, as much as I enjoy them.
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When I have given characters absurdly huge breasts it tends to be Fluttershy and Sonata.
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I've seen SonicBlitz18 apply absurdly large breasts to pretty much all of the female characters in his stories.
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Think I've read some of those.