This is the tail of Link, the Hero of Time, savior of Termina, and broken little boy. Link once again ends up in a new land with no knowledge of how he got there. But with no evils plaguing the land, monsters kept in check, and princesses capable of defending themselves, he is at a loss as to why he is in this land. But while he may not understand it, his most faithful companion and friend certainly does. Watch as Epona, with the help of a few special ponies teach Link to take the world off his shoulders and have fun once more.
PS: I do need a beta as I wish to give everyone something great to read.
Chapters (1)
Change the chapter order to the correct one
Still a few mistakes in there, weeded out some of them but some have manifested themselves.
Random capitalization. Also like I said in my review you had two spaces in between sentences, makes it look less professional.
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I say!
I'll have you know that 4Chan is not just full of 'trollers.'
We also count neckbeards, virgins, racists, homophobes, attention whores, 'edgy' twelve year olds, pedos, people with no self esteem, perverts and people with unwarranted self-importance among our ranks. We're not so one-dimensional, and I'll thank not to imply such again.
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Wait, when did that stop being the standard?
Edit: The part about having two spaces between sentences, I mean.
1209778 Alright, so you have the scum of the Internet on your site.
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I do believe that the second we stopped using typewriters the two spaces after the sentence became unnecessary. Please click on a story in the featured box and tell me if it has two spaces after every last sentence. Same with any other book published within the last 10 years.
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>I do believe that the second we stopped using typewriters the two spaces after the sentence became unnecessary.
Odd, because my English teachers spent a good five years drilling that particular point into our heads, long after typewriters fell into disuse. Odder still is that my computer teacher told us the same thing.
But then, this was in an American school district.
>Alright, so you have the scum of the Internet on your site.
Sweet-talker. You really know just what to say!
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And here, I never even mentioned all the traps.
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Don't know, I just learnt it with one space. Guess I just don't remember it being any other way.
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Same from my end. It would take a conscious effort after every period to not use two. Besides, I did a quick search, and it seems arguments for single over double spacing tend to devolve into bickering over aesthetics, which is entirely subjective. As such, calling one wrong seems rather self-absorbed.
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Well, guess I learn something new every day.
Sorry but I was taught that it is two spaces at the start of a sentence. I have been doing it as such for the better part of ten years, I am not stopping now.
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KK.
A shame this story got trolled so badly, it's actually pretty good! Unfortunately some might not look past the red
I hope it gets picked up again some day.
Well i'm glad to see this story is recovering it is now more green than red plus trollers are d-bags that try and kill talent and my friend u got this in this story and I enjoy the way you space your sentences it is nice and spacy and not to cluttered and that helps to distract most from its short length though I wish the author that took over for naruto rymes would update cause I like that story and yours though the ending bites well just keep on trucking through the mud and who knows one day you might get this on the featured page
Damnit you people are going to make me pick this up again.
Can you continue please???
I smell potential, lots of potential. Plese pick this story up again and continue it.