A Heart full of Kindness

Harold4

Harold4 #1 · Nov 26th, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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Nice beginning so far!

So is Elisio Blaze your OC?

Sparkle91

Sparkle91 #2 · Nov 26th, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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Pond scene = 101 dalmations

Pete100

Pete100 #3 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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You untie your dog's leash from the bench. Just as you are about to reach for your backpack, Lucky quickly dragged you along as he was determined for you meet up with her. You told your dog to slow down but just as both of you are almost near her it was too late. Lucky tangled the leash between her legs and yours as her body presses against yours.

Good Boy

“Better thank Lucky over here for giving me the confidence boost to hand it over to you.” Your dog barked happily after you praise him.

Naw, That dog dragged his ass

Present

How long ago did they meet?

“Eli, wake up.” Sunset said as she keeps shaking you by the shoulder. You quickly opened your eyes as you came back to reality to see Sunset Shimmer, Fluttershy and the Rainbooms with 6 other boys while you are standing, leaning against the Wondercolt Statue. “Finally, your awake and you better wipe your drool.”

Do all of them know each other?

“It’s about how you and Fluttershy met, right?” Sunset guessed.
You are about to protest but you remember Sunset can read the minds of people. You just sheepishly laugh as you looked away.

That would not stop me from denying it.

But there has been something you are keeping a secret from her. Everything that happened involving all of this Equestrian Magic, you think that a sweet girl like Fluttershy shouldn’t be involve with this. Even though she has her powers, you want to make sure she doesn’t get harmed. But you cannot do anything about this since you don’t have powers and kept quiet about this.

Ok, something I’ve noticed so far is that the guys want to protect the girls, but can’t they handle themselves?

“Hey now it’s okay, besides I am your brother. It is my duty to be a role model for our family and to keep an eye on my younger sibling...also a certain someone who is the most egotistic of all of CHS.”

Who’s he talking about?

DiamondandIce

DiamondandIce #4 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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10551593
Yes for Fluttershy

DiamondandIce

DiamondandIce #5 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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10551618
Good guess to Sparkle91

RainbowsofApples

RainbowsofApples #6 · Dec 3rd, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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I don't know what will be your next 5 entries, but apparently, you're going to make the OC and the Equestria Girl have something in common (i.e. same (prob almost) profession, favorite etc.) just like the first entry.

Anyways, good story from both of them.

Pete100

Pete100 #7 · Dec 11th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 1 ·

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“What the-? I turned into a freaking Siberian husky! Fluttershy help me!”

Why a Siberian Husky?

“Hold on Eli, it must have been that choker you are wearing that suddenly glowed. It could be Equestrian magic we need to call the others.” Fluttershy said. She was about to reach to her bag until both of you heard a loud ringing tone. You recognize that it’s your phone and see Lucky trying to bring your bag to you. You told Fluttershy to see who it was as she reaches in your bag. When she got a hold of your phone, she says it's your brother. Fluttershy answered the phone but you didn’t like the expression on her face as she ended the call. “Eli your brother suffered the same thing, let me just call the other girls about this.”

His brother?

“It looks like Eli’s power is to transform into different animals,” Twilight Sparkle said.

Congratulations Eli, you’re Beast Boy.

Everything seems fine since you did try to turn into some types of animals on your free time (one’s that can fit when you transform at backyard of your house), but you were wrong. You discover you have a second ability when you didn’t transform into animal, you instead gain their abilities (dog’s strong sense of smell, owl’s night vision, bat’s sharp hearing, etc.) but can only do one at a time.

Ok, that’s kinda cool.

“Pretty good, don’t feel anything strange. Except when I tried to reach for my phone, I end up shooting web from my hands to grab it. But I am still trying to get used to it.”

Nevermind, he’s spider man.

“Uhm, Eli why are you looking at me like that?” Fluttershy asked as you end up scooping her up in your arms which made her gasp on your sudden action. “E-Eli what are you doing?!” Fluttershy sees the pupils in your eyes start to change. “ From color of his eyes it’s almost like a cat, no like a-”

She’s able to tell the animal based on eye color?

“Hold on tight,” You said as you position yourself in a running position. Before Fluttershy could respond you took off in high speed. You are so focus on getting to CHS sooner that the fact you ignore Fluttershy screaming in the background.

What did he transform into?

Captain Pokemon

Captain Pokemon #8 · Dec 13th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 1 ·

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Im really enjoying this story and i didnt realize it was a sequel to another story but im still enjoying this so far and is curious how often you will update this

theovine93

theovine93 #9 · Dec 18th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 2 ·

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“Eli dear, I just want to say thank you for worrying about our daughter and about bringing all of this up. We know she is very dependent and can take care of herself. You just need to trust her and give her a chance.”

You mean independent?

Pete100

Pete100 #10 · Dec 18th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 2 ·

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Well, it’s nice to know her parents trust her.

DiamondandIce

DiamondandIce #11 · Dec 19th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 2 ·

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10586889
I willl correct that

Harold4

Harold4 #12 · Dec 19th, 2020 · · · Animal Instincts Part 2 ·

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So far, so cute!

Comment posted by DiamondandIce deleted Dec 20th, 2020

Pete100

Pete100 #14 · Dec 20th, 2020 · · · Fluttershy I'm Sorry Part 1 ·

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“Seriously Twilight what is going on?” Your brother asked. “First the robot, then I got knocked out, and when I got up this happened. Twilight once we get Micro Chips to Nurse Redheart I need to go and check on my little brother.”

What does he need to go to the nurse for?

With you behaving more like an animal you didn’t care even though you are facing your brother who is a black belt.

Interesting

This became useless as he quickly backs away as you use your right claw to attack, nearly scratching your brothers hakama.

Is that where his equestrian magic come from?

DiamondandIce

DiamondandIce #15 · Dec 21st, 2020 · · · Fluttershy I'm Sorry Part 1 ·

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10589968
Remember in gift of generosity Ardee was choking him

Pete100

Pete100 #16 · Dec 21st, 2020 · · · Fluttershy I'm Sorry Part 1 ·

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10590507
Oh yea, I thought he grabbed his shirt.

Pete100

Pete100 #17 · Dec 22nd, 2020 · · · Fluttershy I'm Sorry Part 2 ·

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“Of course, he will be alright. He just needs a little knock to the head, then BAM! He now realizes that this was all just a misunderstanding,” Rainbow Dash said confidently. “I just hope he is also alright? I didn’t see him in the gym after he got knocked out.”

I’m guessing rainbow is gonna be the next one?

“ Sure, but I think my master has locked himself in his room right now.” Lucky said (well barking) as Fluttershy understands what he is saying “ I know where a spare key to his room can be found. His brother kept one without him knowing, follow me.”

Thank you for putting that in.

“I guess Lucky told you where you can find a spare key to my room,” You said as you looked at Fluttershy then to your dog. You told Lucky to give both of you some privacy and left. But then you looked away from the person sitting next to you. “Why are you here?”

If that spare key was meant to be a secret, it was a terrible one.

“I know you are a very nice person, it's because of the Equestrian magic in your choker that made you act like an animal and you wouldn’t let anything bad happen to me, your brother and all of our friends.” Then Fluttershy took your head and place it on her upper chest while caressing your head with her hands. “It’s okay now Eli, I forgive you.”

Could we really blame it on the choker?

Hint: Another movie reference was added in this chapter. Try and take a guest.

Are you talking about the white stead from tangled?

Patriots3492

Patriots3492 #18 · Dec 23rd, 2020 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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101 Dalmatians Pond Scene

Pete100

Pete100 #19 · Dec 30th, 2020 · · · Nala and the Doggy Daycare ·

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“To make it short, Sunset Shimmer read Ardee and Rarity’s thoughts. After their date, Ardee stayed over at Rarity’s place for the night, then they had sex and he even had the guts to move in with her. The End.” Rainbow Dash went straight to the point.

How is that any of applejack’s business? As a matter of fact, how is that ANY of their business?

You and Fluttershy only reacted with open mouths. Rarity explains that this was just only temporary for him to keep an eye on her and Sweetie Belle until their parents returned from their honeymoon. She quickly returns her attention back to her best friend to stop hurting her boyfriend. Now that Applejack has stopped strangling Ardee and both you and Fluttershy are here already, the meeting has begun.

If I was ardee I would have said “yea, I did it with your friend, and I enjoyed every bit of it, while she enjoyed every inch.”

You haven’t thought about it when you began making a connection with the little one. Then it hit you, since what you can think of is Fluttershy, even though with a shy personality you know that she will be very successful woman. “I think I will name her Nala.” The little white tiger began licking you meaning she likes the name you gave her.

What does Nala have to do with fluttershy?

“Hi Eli,” You see Fluttershy but your eyes went wide to see that she is not wearing her usual blue dress. Instead, she is wearing a white t-shirt with a red mini-skirt and matching red shoes, also wearing a green headband with a green bow on it. “Thanks for coming, me and the girls really appreciate the help.”

I don’t remember her wearing a blue dress.

Pete100

Pete100 #20 · Dec 30th, 2020 · 1 · · A Heart full of Kindness ·

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“Like I said it is alright now.” Then Fluttershy lift her head and you are now looking into her teal eyes still blushing. “Eli, I... I want to do it with you!” Your ears couldn’t believe the words she just said, does she really mean it? You guess it took her a lot of courage to say it. “Please, I want you to love me more.”

Did he not see applejack’s reaction to ardee having sex with rarity? What makes him think rainbow dash’s reaction is gonna be any better?

After one final thrust Fluttershy scream in happiness as she came while you release your seed inside of her. You slowly thrust as you continue to fill her insides.

And with that, Eli has probably signed his death warrant.

“That was actually a tranquilizer dart,” You said. “I bought this gun in case any of the animals in the zoo get a bit upset. That was actually for Nala in case she became hostile when she first came here. But it looks like she made herself at home when I bonded with her so there wasn’t any need for it. Let us hope she doesn’t remember what she just saw.”

I kinda want her to remember.

Pete100

Pete100 #21 · Jan 4th, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·

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If he could get away with sneaking a tranquilizer gun in school, I wonder what else you could get away with sneaking.

fluttershyfan3030

fluttershyfan3030 #22 · Oct 29th, 2022 · · · The Animal Lovers ·

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101 Dalmatians. I laughed when i figured it out. Good start

Ghost2003

Ghost2003 #23 · Jul 11th, 2023 · · · Epilogue ·

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I always come back to this story. I'm Jezo2003, well I was but I changed my name to Vinyl. I will always love this story because of the romance between the oc and fluttershy. Also I love the clop too 💛

DiamondandIce