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DiamondandIce

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Ghost2003
Ghost2003 #1 · Jul 4th, 2021 · · · Two Faithful Friends ·
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I love rainbow dash so much YES!!

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #4 · Jul 8th, 2021 · · · Two Faithful Friends ·
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This scenario started when you applied for a part-time job at the Canterlot day spa as a masseur which you are still working there till now. One day Canterlot High’s basketball team came here for relaxation after their last victory against another high school which Rainbow Dash is also the captain there who request for a sports massage. Then she comes here often and normally you expect it’s another sports massage but curiosity came to your mind, she actually comes here for a pampered muscle massage and indulgent pedicure. She warned you that if you tell her friends or anyone about this, it’s goodbye to your little birdie. Even though you clammed up her friends should have found out about this already, mostly Rarity and Applejack.

Ah, a reference from Applejack's day off. Clever.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #5 · Jul 11th, 2021 · · · Inner Peace Part 1 ·
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Great chapter. The funny part was when Sky teleported in Rainbow's room. It kinda felt like Dragon ball super by that part.

(But oh what I wouldn't give to see rainbow dash in a towel.

:twilightoops::facehoof:. I can't believe I just said that.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #6 · Jul 15th, 2021 · · · Inner Peace Part 2 ·
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Nice one, those two are opening up to each other instead of keeping it to themselves.

DiamondandIce
DiamondandIce #7 · Jul 15th, 2021 · · · Inner Peace Part 2 ·
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10901276
Did you notice the reference? :rainbowwild:

Starlight Nova
Starlight Nova #11 · Jul 20th, 2021 · · · Inner Peace Part 2 ·
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jujitsu

Really? Why that martial art? I don't know much about jujitsu, but strictly going by what I do know, that really doesn't seem like the martial art Rainbow Dash would choose.

DiamondandIce
DiamondandIce #12 · Jul 20th, 2021 · · · Inner Peace Part 2 ·
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Mostly Rainbow Dash is karate the OC is the jiujitsu. This is based on the part of Rainbow Rocks where she shows karate moves and in FIM episode when she helps Apple Bloom earn her cutie mark and she is a black belt

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #13 · Jul 29th, 2021 · · · Role as a Brother/ Friend Part 1 ·
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Great job as always. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #14 · Aug 10th, 2021 · · · Role as a Brother/ Friend Part 2 ·
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Is it just you or did you see Rainbow Dash looked away and you somehow notice she slightly blush for odd reason? You also have to apologize to Frostbite but your younger brother took responsibility for you but Pinkie explained that a copy of him regret what happened when she found him at home-economics. What matters after today is that your sibling is safe and no one else got badly hurt, that you also have friends to be there for each other.

Oooh, Rainbow Dash is blushing

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #15 · Aug 15th, 2021 · · · I WIN! ·
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Aw, now that's sweet.

Starlight Nova
Starlight Nova #16 · Aug 16th, 2021 · · · I WIN! ·
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Will there be any physical combat in this story?

DiamondandIce
DiamondandIce #17 · Aug 16th, 2021 · · · I WIN! ·
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10939772
Its already there in this chapter just not detailed and the previous one

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #18 · Aug 20th, 2021 · · · Standing by Your Side ·
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Awesome. Now those two are an awesome couple.

SUPERETHAN2
SUPERETHAN2 #19 · Aug 23rd, 2021 · · · Standing by Your Side ·
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“OH, COME ON. How could you still be so dense after what I just did!” Rainbow said but you just stood there. “All this time the teasing and after kissing you, means that I like you.”

I mean in his defense all the teasing didn't really make it that clear and I doubt anyone would come to that conclusion from being kissed like that out of the blue, especially during a match. I know I would first think that they only did it as a cheap tactic to win. Other than her blushing a few times, there wasn't really much of a hint that he missed, that wouldn't be interpret as them simply being close friends.

SUPERETHAN2
SUPERETHAN2 #20 · Aug 23rd, 2021 · · 1 · Role as a Brother/ Friend Part 1 ·
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“I already talk about this with Flash Sentry about getting over with her. Don’t you dare make him recall that.”

That's one thing that bugged me. Why not have Twilight decide and tell him they won't be a thing? You have a magic journal to contact her, use it.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #21 · Aug 23rd, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·
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I noticed a dragon quest reference there.

And rainbow forgot her undies. She's gonna feel a draft today.

Pete100
Pete100 #22 · Aug 15th, 2023 · · · Two Faithful Friends ·
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Ok, with R.D, Sky, and to a certain extent A.J being martial artists I’m expecting some good fight scenes.

Pete100
Pete100 #24 · Aug 15th, 2023 · · · Inner Peace Part 1 ·
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“Uh-no, it’s okay there is really no need.” Then you immediately scoop her up and carried her bridal style as she demands you to put her down but too late as both of you are now above the clouds and now about to free fall while you’re still carrying her. “ITS TOO HIGH, WERE TOO HIGH. I WANT TO BE ON THE GROUND NOW, NOW. SKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!” She begins to panic as she starts to squirm on your arms. You comply with her request as you imagine it in your thoughts as both of you are on the ground now and you put her down only for her to drop on her knees. “Why...did...you...do...that? I... nearly...wet myself.”

Can’t she fly?

Pete100
Pete100 #25 · Aug 15th, 2023 · · · Inner Peace Part 1 ·
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10895976
I’m glad I’m not the only one who thought about that.

Pete100
Pete100 #26 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · Inner Peace Part 2 ·
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“Now I know where you got that line from.” Onyx groans as he slowly got up. “You could have warned me that you were about to do that. Luckily, I slipped on my ring quick enough before I hit the ground.”

I sometimes forget what their items are.

The elder spoke to your dad about this and that is when he introduces himself to you as your jiujitsu master. But you told your dad that you will still follow his footsteps and learn both and he allowed you.

That’s interesting

Pete100
Pete100 #27 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · Role as a Brother/ Friend Part 1 ·
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“Come on now both of ya’ll.” Applejack stepped in between before both of you started ripping each other’s throats off. “Now enough with these jokes and let’s not keep Flash Sentry waiting.”

My money is on sky.

“Yes, we did but it looks like our friends went berserk and are going after Micro Chips. The other girls are trying to hold them off. Can you help me take him to somewhere safe until we straighten things out with them?”

I’m still confused on how they were able to keep their magic after that.

Pete100
Pete100 #29 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · Role as a Brother/ Friend Part 2 ·
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The fight scene wasn’t bad, but I feel like it could be better.

Pete100
Pete100 #30 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · I WIN! ·
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Also there are blank spots which I'll leave the numbers to your imagination and about the martial arts moves, I'm not an expert and I based them from watching fighting shows and I'll let you guys do the criticism.

You don’t have to really be an expert. You could just do research.

“Okay listen up everyone,” Ms. Harshwinny getting the attention of all of you. “For today’s class we will be doing self-defense.” What the teacher said made everyone whisper between each other. “Now I know this may sound out of the blue, but after what happened back at the fund raiser with Mr. Steel and Mr. Ardee its better if we do a recap and/or learn a few tips on how we can protect ourselves when needed.”

Didn’t expect her to be teaching it.

Rainbow explained that what he is holding that you wore is a weight vest for exercise. The students now understand which is the reason why Rarity can’t lift it and Ardee having a bit of struggle. But the fun wasn’t done after you remove your straps around your wrist and your ankles, they fell to floor like they’re heavy.

I think I know who’s the strongest member so far.

“Hey Sky,” Rainbow gets your attention. “Why don’t we resume or last match to see and settle who is better in martial arts.”

Are we gonna see more martial artists?

“I’m no expert when it comes to this since I’m with the fencing club, but here is what I know.” Sunset begins to state her opinion. “Rainbow Dash has her speed, agility and nimbleness which make her hard to catch; Sky on the other hand has strength and his mind as his advantage. To make this clearer, it’s a stalemate between these two.”

That’s pretty interesting.

“Yes, I am.” You respond while rubbing your head then you looked at your victor. “ Who wouldn’t have thought that no man has defeated me but this girl is the only one who has the guts to challenge and defeat me .” You thought but then accepted your loss anyway. “She really is the best.”

So no one else is a match for sky?

Pete100
Pete100 #31 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · Standing by Your Side ·
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“Nothing important, just remembered something.” She walked by after teasingly holding your crotch for a while and head to your room to get dressed while you resume with your shower. “ Me and Fluttershy, sleeping over with Sky and his brother. This is going to be fun .”

I think I know what’s going through her head.

Pete100
Pete100 #33 · Aug 16th, 2023 · · · Epilogue ·
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I wonder what A.J’s reaction is gonna be to the plan rainbow came up with.

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