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DiamondandIce


We don't deserve a bad ending. It's up to us to create our good endings.

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Comment posted by CarolMAssphault deleted Apr 20th, 2021
Comment posted by CarolMAssphault deleted Apr 20th, 2021

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Apologies but I prefer avoiding use of any vulgar words in the comments no offense if it will affect both author and readers.

The Rainbooms do not consider Sunset Shimmer their friend. They only treat her as an assignment from Princess Twilight Sparkle from the other side of the portal. I don't think that they would be able to forgive Sunset for all the years of hard and cruel life she has given the students of Canterlot High.

Author I want to ask why is the Main Character so forgiving to Sunset after everything that she has done? :pinkiegasp: Well I mean if it was me and realistically speaking a lot of other students at that school, I would have given her the "Eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth" treatment. There is a price to pay after all. A big price and something like that just doesn't get forgotten overnight.

Don't get me wrong. I know that Sunset Shimmer finally gets the climax of her redemption arc at the end of Rainbow Rocks. But in the context of the original, It has taken 6 moons (or months) in that matter for the girls to finally warm up to Sunset and even then, they still get a little distrusful of her from time to time which is realistic.

Nice job on the intro. Can't wait to see how it turns out later on.

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I will correct the days to what you said

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Ah. Okay. Thanks for letting me know.

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Think outside the box and the reason why he is like thatvwill be revealed once the story progresses

"I said...AM I CLEAR?!!!!" You yelled making everyone jumped including Sunset on how serious you are right now.

Better take that base out your voice. You can get in a lot of trouble for that.

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Dude, you have no idea how much I agree with you.

When will the next chapter be released.

I am Wait for the update I thank you will love in the story so far

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your welcome, soon my friend next chapter will be released

Few minutes of your ride, you parked outside and what it looks like the amphitheater. You remember this is where the final round of the Battle of the Bands was held and Sunset and her friends defeated the Dazzlings. You entered the area and looked around. All of this brings back memories and it's been long already and Sunset has left her past and moved on, now with her friends by her side. Every person does deserve a second chance and it’s better to ‘Forgive than to Forget’ like the saying goes and that you are happy for her.

If that’s what he thinks, then I can’t judge.

After checking some of the boy’s items, yours is next. Twilight stated that the red crystal you found at the amphitheater contains shadow magic. You remember Sunset stating according to Princess Twilight that the sirens used their singing to cause disharmony, so it seems that the shard you found has no relation to the Dazzlings powers.

“It says on my analysis that you can also become a shadow and can control other people shadow’s as well.” Twilight states as the results came out for you.

Ok, if that’s true, then he may be the biggest threat out of all the boys.

Twilight jotted down what you did on her notebook. But she notices how Sunset was uneasy about her friend’s powers.

“I something the matter Sunset?” Twilight asked.

“Yes, I just have a bad feeling about when you mention Dusk’s is shadow magic,” Sunset said. “You don’t mind if I observe how, he controls his? Also, its better if each of us is assigned to one to make things less difficult.”

I don’t see why.

Ok, now his powers are starting to get confusing.

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This will be answered once I release the next chapters

Is it bad that I want powers just so I can challenge the rainbooms and the boys?

Anyone else getting venom vibes?

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Was that meant to be a reply to my comment?

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Yes, yes it is. I was trying to say I also have the same vibe like you did.

Would you be so kind enough to tell us when the next chapter is coming out

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Ohh. Because, you forgot to hit the reply button. So I didn’t see it.

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Don’t worry. I know a few that have done it.

Honestly, I feel like that is a terrible excuse to forgive someone.

Nice chapter. Didn't know you were inspired by Dr. Wolf. I watched all of his videos and was impressed on how he talked to them. Although it's too bad he didn't do one of Sunset though, would've been impressive to see him helping her.

:rainbowlaugh:. Also I saw what you did at the end. You added a Avengers Infinity War reference in it. Ingenious move there.:rainbowlaugh:

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Really? Because the reference is very obvious. Its how Dusk screams.:moustache:

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I think I missed the screaming part.

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Nope, not a single video about her. Oh sure, she was mentioned by Princess Celestia, but not as herself.

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Don't know, I think no one or Dr wolf himself thought about that, or they didn't ask him. Then again I have no idea on how to reach him and ask to make a video about him and Sunset.

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I remember noticing months ago, but I would have assumed he’s done it by now.

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Did he do one on starlight?

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Yep. He did one for fluttershy, applejack, pinkie pie, rarity, rainbow dash, twilight, starlight, spike, Celestia, luna, Maud, diamond tiara, discord, Tirek, did an anger management with Gilda, Trixie, Iron Will and limestone pie, and did another one with neighsay, ember, gruff and Rutherford, he even made one of the CMC. But no sunset shimmer.

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Oh, and he also did Tirek, cozy glow and chrysalis.

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