Solid! Much improved for the main event, and it nicely wraps things up with the prior story. Twilight clearly needs to get laid.

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Don't tempt me!

Cadance sure is kink- oh hey neat twist at the end there.

One thing I'd ask is that if you leave a dislike please let me know why in the comments. There's obviously nothing wrong with anyone disliking my story, but if it's something I can fix, change, improve upon it would really help me out.

>.> i wanna see more of what happens with this timeline, need more buggy lovins, and maybe a twi getting some loves too

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I actually just released a sequel of sorts that focuses on Twilight, but I gave it a Teen rating so I didn't want to link it directly.
After that I'm hoping to wrap everything up with one more raunchy story focused around Twi finally getting some fun of her own.

Well, I got a kinky story, AND an exceptionally fluffy ending. Oh, and I have pancakes.
I am truly lucky today!
And good on Queen Bug, making sure the spell was safe for Cady. How nice.
Bug pone is best kind of pone.

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Thanks! And yes, buggo fully intended to help Cadance... yep, no selfish motives whatsoever.

The eldest was Luster Dawn, a “Sun-Kissed Daughter” that Luna had given birth to nearly 9 months after the first Sun Celebration ceremony.

It’s more likely that it was around 11 months, I believe, unless you meant for her to be premature.

at least it's a happy ending for all the mares omg