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Carol Martelé, a violinist, falls hopelessly in love with phonograph enthusiast Jingle Jolly.
But their love wasn't meant to as fate pulled them apart.

Octavia Melody and Vinyl Scratch are here too.

Based on "A Hearth's Warming Tail" if the characters were their own ponies.

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Comments ( 5 )

A very sweet story with a satisfying ending. Another go through with an edit comb would make it even better, as I did notice some grammar/spelling errors, but overall a wonderful read. <3

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Thank you for pointing that out, I'll try to be more thourough next time I write! I have some trouble with spelling and grammar at times and I appreciate when someone tells me. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

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Of course, you're welcome. ^.^ I know the feeling, sometimes I am the same way so it's okay. Perhaps have a friend/pre-reader who can go through it with you next time? I know that always helps me. :scootangel:

A young upstart unicorn Disk Jockey by the name of Vinyl Scratch, who adorned an electric blue mane with lighter blue, almost cyan highlights which worked well against her pale yellow coat, had gotten the opportunity of a lifetime.

Huh. I've assumed for a whole decade now that she has a white coat, but see now on the wiki that it's otherwise.

PresentPerfect
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Great concept. You could easily get a short novel out of the setup, too. :)

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