After a portal weirdly opens in Twilight's library, Twi and Spike are thrown into it. They then wake up to find themselves outside an 18 year-old male brony's house (his name is Brandon). He then brings her into his house and then takes care of them untill he can find out how to return them back to Equestria, while the mane 6 (now 5) trys to investigate her dissapearence, hoping to find them before they go insane from the grief.
p.s.This is my first fanfic, I will need some help 'cause I can't find a cover pic that suits it.
Chapters (1)
It's a little short don't you think?
WAY too short. Dunno why i read it in the first place.
I don't know about this one, I guess I'll wait for another chapter before making a judgement
my advice is to make chapters at least 1000 words(preferably 2000 or more), a prologue can be done well with about 500 words but it isn't easy to do.
it's intresting... but there needs to be more words.
so then, in 24 hours, I expect another chapter
there better be another chapter in 20 mins
I love the plot. The way of writing in good. BUT! it needs to be longer.
so... 20 mins
im back again... an hour late to check. YOU HAVE FAILED ME APPRENTICE. You must DIE!
Well, I must say that I agree with others. Too short. I will be tracking. Good luck with your first fanfiction! (Hope it gets a better reception than mine
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Moar!