On their twenty-seventh anniversary, Celestia and her human husband share a moment in the middle of the night.
So many Human X Pony stories are centered around the beginning of the relationship. I had a thought about what one might look like years and years on. This was my attempt at such a story. It's a shameless bit of romantic fluff with my favorite Sun Horse but I had fun writing it and I hope you enjoy reading it!
Thanks to a dear friend for editing! As always, PLEASE leave commentary/criticisms. I'm here to learn.
Art is from Foxmi. Thanks to General Grant for finding it!
https://www.deviantart.com/foxmi/art/MLP-Celestia-Humanization-353100644
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A good romantic story, but the exposition at the beginning is more vague than intriguing.
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I can see that. I wanted to add a BIT of backstory but not dwell on it. Thanks for the read!
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If you want to tell a story of pure fluff, exposition doesn't add anything.
https://www.deviantart.com/foxmi/art/MLP-Celestia-Humanization-353100644
Found the source for the cover. Artist's name is Foxmi
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Thank you! I will update accordingly!
You know what else is cliche in these stories? Making the OC younger than Celestia instead of older. Or human/whatever species lives in the MLP world. Why not a D&D dragon?
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That would be a neat concept for sure! I did a human just because I adore the idea of humans and ponies interacting and humans don't live nearly as long as Alicorns. It is cliche though. I assume most other authors also really like the idea. :)
It would be interesting to see a story where was around someone much older.