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Speak of soul razorblades. How can he even survive.
I have to say, this chapter was pretty damn good. I'm gonna keep reading, and I'd like to see you keep typing!
You have a way with words. I was laughing, in suspense, and actually was afraid for Murky and Brimstone at some points.
I like Shackles more than Brimstone, gotta say. Shackles makes me laugh in that dark way because of his hilarious cruelty. Brimstone is a bit boring to me, too much of a one note, I feel like I've got his entire character sorted while Shackles is still mysterious. Specifically, that bit with his slave number had me giggling like a bastard.
Still enjoying, even if every chapter should by all rights be three.
code heroes everywhere !
2174619While I prefer Brim, Shackles is the kind of sick son-ova-bitch that you can make you laugh like the Joker.
Church of Atom reference? Check!
Fanatical creeps doing strange and generally immoral stuff? Check!
Murk barely surviving yet another near-death situation? Check!
Yet another impressive (and long, Celestia help me...) chapter. Well now that it's 4:00 AM I better sleep, more Murky adventures tomorrow!
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Great chapter, love the series, am rutting for Murky, hope he lives long enough for the Gardens of Equestria.
God damn it, Murky, why can't you catch a break?
Murky must be one of the luckiest, unlucky, ponies I ever met. He keeps getting into this sh*t but something always happens to get him out.
So I stopped read this story a while back, now I am glad I picked it up again!
3964847 yes the irony is painfully obvious in that.
So Murky's 007?
"The name's Number Seven, Murky Number Seven"
*James Bond music plays*
Why didn't he want to be a ghoul? Radiation would heal him instead of him always being on the brink of death from rad poisoning and he would be practically immortal, why not be a ghoul?
Poor Murky! Hang on!
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Giving him that number is just asking for trouble!
6801550 "I'm so hungry! All I have is this grill, charcoal, matches, raw steaks, and a set of grill tools! I'm DOOMED!"
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He'd end up a feral, like the ones used in the army. I assume that's what they were trying to do and doing. He'd be a mindless, immortal slave.
And you should never let a thief hold your gun.
Yes. Yes,yes,yes,yes,yes
Finally, finally Murky did something. Yes he may cry and whine but he managed to do someting.
Now this for me is the first chapter that seems to lead somewhere.
Not only we seen very interesting character, mean Weathervane, but story finally seems to move forward.
On the other hoof...
I know that this was formerly supposed to be collection of single stories, but chapters are really too long.
And I said that as a person who managed to finish Project Horizons without much issue.
In this apter are at least three plot points and it could be made into three separate chapters without sacrificing anything.
And even those could be trimmed down without sacrificing story or character development.
If you would make this into an audiobook, each chapter so far would be aproximately four and half hour long on itself, that would mean at least sixteen hours of recording per chapter.
I dont really know why FoE chapters in most major stories are so long. One of my favorite narrators calls it " pissing match with Kkat " and I feel inclined to agree more and more.
Such lengthy chapters both in text or audiobook turn many people off and drive them away.
7954989 "pissing match with Kkat" are you talking about VP (Visualpony)? I think I remember him saying that...
Thats funny how brimstone's number is 666
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I think so too.
Not gonna lie, I was kinda rooting for Murk to get ghoulified.
Fun fact: metal rulers were banned in my highschool. Turns out kids were sharpening them.
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Same. It would have preserved his life, at least.
Well, there's one helluva sign of terminal radiation sickness.