Wow. People always recommend this on a website I go on whenever we talk about FO:E. Odd to see it having so few likes. I guess people just prefer Google Docs.
Glad I decided to start reading this. This is now one of the stories I always hope to update soon.

This whole chapter, I have one word ringing in my ears:
Galvanize.

A minor point of contention: Pyrelight didn't get huge when she soaked up radiation in the crater. She just powered up. She was emitting a visible aura "a hundred times her size", but her physical size didn't change.

this story looks really good!
i shall continue to read it in the weeks ahead. :D

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well,
he's a malnourished, small slave.
with an artistic streak, suffering from what some could be classified as shock.

i'd sure as hell galvanize if i were him. xD

Just a quick thing here... I'm not sure if you know how tragedy works... but you usually start off high, and then eventually get worse... If this is the high point....... then I can only imagine what lies in store...

Did it strike anyone that this could be a classical comedy? If so, this is a fantastic start.

That was one long opening chapter.

I will say this. You have given me things to think about.

Dear me, first chapter is sure a big one... so worth it though, so worth it.

One chapter in a day is clearly the way to handle this bad boy. I don't think I could even try to take on multiple of this volume.

It's a really good start though. I'm already rooting for Murky. I have a feeling he'll meet Number 6 and the unicorn mare that was checking out his sketchbook - also probably the trio of gangers too.

You, sir, are a fantastic writer. I loved the first chapter.

Instant favorite.

Go Murky, go!

And down with your arch-nemisis, the Pink Mare!

Looking forward to seeing where this goes! I'll be reading this for the next few weeks.

Some grammar issues I found:

A gunshot sounded as they were given inventive to hurry and let the next group through...panic shot through me as I felt myself dragged down under their hooves

inventive --> incentive

The unbalanced pile came roaring down around me, distracting the bullies as they slid their way across the mud, dodging random appliances and hunks of metal from rollercoasters that had rolled off the main pile with a sound like an ironmongers being demolished.

sound like an ironmongers --> sound like an ironmonger

I'm here with...you guessed it...that thing that used to gives us all the blues.

that used to gives us --> that used to give us

1469007 I agree. Just finished the first chapter and I feel like Fuzzy has played the whole "misery" angle a bit too loudly. It got to the point of being comical multiple times throughout with the constant loads of shit being poured onto Murky's shoulders almost arbitrarily. It's competently written and definitely readable so far, but I can hardly feel any empathy for such an exaggerated case.

>>Mandelbrony
Your last grammar correction is technically incorrect. DJ-Pon3 is broadcasting that sentence, so incorrect grammar is actually giving some realism because no one speaks with 100% correct grammar.

I feel so sorry for poor Murky!

...I was to die soon as an example to others when hey they next held an ‘event.’

Spelling error.
It's... somewhere within the giant wall of text near the beginning.

Hard to believe it's been almost four years since I started this story (within one week of four years, actually)! It'll be fun reading the story in its entirety. I hope you don't mind if I point out some typos along the way.

They hurt me and told me that I was to die soon as an example to others when hey next held an ‘event.’

they

After last night, I last thing I wanted to face them again before I was sent to the Pit.

Not sure what this part is supposed to say.

Wow... I was expecting more comments for a story of this size and popularity...

Oh well.

FoodFrogs was here, I guess.

I hadn't expected to find an FoE fic every big as good as the original but I clearly have. Liked and tracking.

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All but the mightiest of bronies took one look at the chapter length and ran for the hills long before reaching the bottom of the page to comment. Shame too because this story is looking to be every bit as well-written as the one that inspired it.

Oh and AJ Aficionado was here as well. Will probably wind up dead trekking across 1 million words worth of Fallout Equestria.

Press F to pay respects.

“Slaving in Filly almost makes you wish for a Winter Rad Up...”

Hah, I see what you did there.

Anyway it's about time I started on this one.

Alright, here we go...

finally got myself to read that behemoth! and i think im enjoying it so far..

Well then I’m here finally.
First Fallout Equestria then project horizons and now I’m onto murky.
I thank god for quarantine as it’s finally give me a chance to read all these.
Onto chapter 2!!!!

Yes please.

I can already tell this story is going to make me very sad

Alright, bring it on

Ho lee. That was a long chapter.

What are the chances number six is a distant relative of Shinning Armor. I believe they both have shields as cutie marks right?

I hope they can meet again down the line