• Member Since 2nd Jun, 2017
  • offline last seen 1 hour ago

Arthor2017


Sequels1

E

A story full of rare and crazy situations that will occur at Canterlot High or anywhere in the city where the characters of Equestria Girls will be the protagonists of these scenarios, whoever happens first.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

It’s a nice collection of short excerpts of scenarios, though I found the first two stories most interesting, especially for Derpy’s chloroform; though Twilight, being the bookworm she was, should instinctively hold her breathe as much as possible when she knew of the possibility of chloroform lingering in the air. But then again, there is only so much time that would buy her. I wonder how Derpy hasn’t fainted yet?

10227138
Who knows, but she won't stop at anything until somebody tells her the cloth DOES smell like chloroform.

I have to say, I had a rather bad day... until I stumbled upon this anthology of short comedic scenes. I have to say, you pretty much made my day with these tidbits of humour. Thank you! :twilightsmile:

On a side note, I noticed some typos, missing punctuation and other random errors, as well as a lot of recurring tense inconsistencies. Write either in past tense, or present tense, don't switch between them! It's just a bunch of little details, but sadly they can spoil the enjoyment of a story a bit and turn a lot of potential readers away.

10512416
Thank you. I'm still working on those detail, but I'm glad you like it.

10512551
You’re welcome, glad I could help a bit. Let me know if you ever need anything! :twilightsmile:

I loved that scenario with Spoiled Rich and Sunset Shimmer. I wouldn’t wait for two hours if I was stuck in a hole. 😂

10574727
Me neither, but some people are just like that. I'm glad you liked it.

:rainbowderp:That last one was a bit disturbing and didn't seem funny in the least.

10934955
Yeah, not the best of the scenarios but it's something.

Pretty good. Interesting fiction that made me laugh and giggle.

11255544
Thank you very much. I'm still working in improvising and be more creative for future releases.

I know that feel, Luna. The worst.

That poor guy with 13 children.

That Sonata story punchline was great!

Aw, I thought the Twilight Sunset one was sweet.

I like the format here.

Login or register to comment