A girl is given a pink toy pony. She is known, as Pinkie Pie.
The girl is happy, looking forwards to endless hours of play and fun.
Only this toy comes with a stern warning; instructing the owner to give the pony a Muffin each day.
The given reason: Because Cupcake. Cryptic and sinister as it may be, but what are the consequences?
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This story sounds fun :)
This is a cute little story. There is a problem, though: the punctuation. You have way too many commas, and semicolons where commas are actually supposed to be.
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I hope it will stay fun, as the events unfold.
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I hope I can maintain this mood, with comming chapters as the events follows.
I will have to go over this.
I believe that a phone call might be in order. And though it might take some convincing. Some nice men in black suits might come over to help,
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I don't know, I don't know ..
Knowing Pinkie Pie(the original), she is a step ahead ..
Knowing the Evil Doll(it's original); this can only end between no good, and very bad ..
Though I guess it could be an interesting chapter or two if it were to happen?