Enormous Girlfriend 2 - Rainbow Dash on Earth

by Crystalbreeze

Part 2

Vince Harrington was living in the eighth floor of a ten stories high apartment building in downtown. When he arrived, he parked the car and went up to his floor with the lift. As he got home, he dropped his work clothes into the bathroom and put on his home clothes. He made himself popcorn and turned on his TV. He started watching My Little Pony.

His bedroom was blue colored and there were tons of posters on the walls. Most of them were about MLP. Vince collected the MLP movie posters, some beautiful pony-artwork and some sex-theme images too. On the shelf next to his bed he kept his figures and plushes. He had the Mane Six, Derpy, the other three princesses and almost every background character as a cool action figure, or a plushie. So, after all, Vince Harrington was an MLP fan, or a brony, as you would say.

After he finished an episode and ate the popcorn he felt himself bored. Once he had an idea. He lied on the bed, took his pants off and gently grabbed his under part. He pulled and squeezed it, while thinking about the date with Rainbow Dash, the ultra-sexy pony giantess from another world where every pony is gigantic. Living in that world is the dream that never come true. Dashie is sooo wonderful. Despite being sexy, she's kind and cool. She always walks around the downtown, passing by skyscrapers and looking down at the bug-sized people, who make macrophile porn of her. She's too big to live in a house, so instead she lives in the sky, among the clouds. She said that in her homeworld she lived in a cloud palace in the sky.

Some minutes passed and Vince heard a voice from outside the building. It laughed.

"Did you start without me, my love?"

"Oh my gosh, she's here!" Vince shouted to himself and got up from the bed. He ran towards the balcony without wearing pants, only a T-shirt.

The view was absolutely dick-lifting. On the other side of the street Vince saw the giantess. The beautifully massive pegasus, who was enjoying her time sitting on an office building. Her huge wings were spread. Dashie was almost naked, she only wore a brown bra and panties. Her boobs were swinging in the air. Her face was filled with joy, confidence and enjoyment. Exactly the way Vince likes it.

"Oh," she said to the tiny human with a smile. "Did I interrupt you, my love?"

"Nope, nope!" Vince shook his head. "I'm sorry, I just-"

"You couldn't wait to have some fun.?" Dashie leaned closer to Vince's balcony. Her chest hung above the busy street. Her eyes were clear and innocent. So cute. "You fantasized about me, didn't you?"

"Yes, I did."

"So you missed me. I missed you too. I missed you so much!"

She then stood up from the office bulding and now Vince could see her full size. Absolutely gigantic. Dashie had one step further and she reached Vince's apartment building. The people below her, who just walked along the street, weren't surprised too much. Some of them stopped and watched the gentle giantess, the most part however moved on. Dashie paid attention to them, she tried not to squash a citizen, or a car.

Dashie's head now covered Vince Harrington's field of view.

"Greeting kiss?" she asked.

Vince nodded. If Dashie wouldn't pay attention, she could easily push her giant pony head into the building. Instead, she hugged it tightly. Everyone could hear the crackling sounds which came from inside the building. Vince's whole head was covered inside Dash's mouth. He found it a bit hard to give kiss to a monster sized mouth. at one moment, Dash sucked up Vince's body inside her mouth by accident. She spit him out immediately. Vince landed on his back on the balcony.

"Oh gosh. So sorry, Vince. I didn't meant to-"

"No excuses Dashie, nothing happened." Vince stood up. His body was shining because of the slimy saliva. "It's so nice you surprised me. Good to see you again!"

"Are you in some funtime with me in the evening? We'll do it in the air, lying on the clouds."

"You bet I'm in!"

"But first, let's finish what you started." she said with a grin.

"What?"

"The masturbation, silly boy! You didn't finish it. You're dick is still lifting up and down."

Vince shyly covered his little toy with his two hands.

"Don't be shy, little one! I'll help you finish it."

Dash turned around hier giantess body and now Vince was face to face with her glorious butt.

"Feel free to touch it anywhere!"

Vince touched the giantess butt, tjen his dick was looking straight upwards. Rainbow Dash's butt felt so soft and slippery. Vince couldn't help it, but he soon hugged the butt and kissed it too. Especially the cutie mark. He kissed it many times.

"Are you feeling better?"

"Yeah, but still nothing down there." said Vince. "Can you do something more attracting, please?"

"i have a lot of ideas in my hands, my love." Dash turned back and looked down to the tiny human fella. She then reached for him and liften him up to the air.

"Whoa!" yelled Vince, he was afraid of height. Dash's fingers were gently covering his body and didn't let him fall.

"No worries, I got you." then the giantess placed the tiny human between her large breasts. Vince was swimming in Dash's boobs. At this moment, he felt the promised satsfaction. As he touched the soft boobs, his swinging toy let out the juicy stuff inside it.

"Gosh, this was gooood!" Vince said.

"Can we go to our little date, my love? Are you ready?"

"Yeah. Oh, I want to travel inside your confortable bra."

"No prob. Let's go!"

Dashie then left the apartment building and started walking along the street. Her big steps left some footprints on the road. While she was walking, her balloon-light boobies were swinging in the air under her bra. Vince was inside and he enjoyed the travel so much.

Under them, on the street, the curious citizens took their phones and cameras in their hands and started filming. A bunch of people was trying to follow the famous couple, but unfortunately Rainbow Dash's steps were to long for an average sized human to follow. Still, the couple's true fans didn't give up and followed them.

Both Rainbow Dash and Vince Harrington could hear them scream and cheer happily as they saw them. Above Vince, Dash looked at the tiny people waving and whistleing. She waved back to them and smiled.

Suddenly Vince noticed somebody in the crowd. A familiar face. It was Austen, who was dining in Bailey's Diner earlier that day. Austen was running, pushing his way close to Dashie. He almost ran under her giantess foot. He was very quick. About ten meters behind him ran Austen's friend, Brian. Brian was furiously wheezing because he never ran this much, but he kept running, while yelling: "I want to kiss you, Rainbow Dash! I want to kiss you!"

Austen yelled back to him: "ONLY AFTER ME! I'LL KISS HER FIRST!"

"NOOO!" Brian speeded up, he was like an angry bull.

Austen waved to Vince, who was swimming in dashie's boobs. "Hey dude! We're here! Look down! HELLO!" he screamed with joy. They really came there. This was the first time Austen and Brian saw a giantess pony. Best experience ever.

Vince saw them. He waved back to them. dashie gave the two running guys interested looks. She once asked: "Are they two friends of yours?"

Vince looked up to Rainbow's giant pony-face and laughed. "Yeah, real fans. Both love you."

"Wow, nice."

"You are the idol of the guy running in front. The other behind him wants to kiss you."

"They seem nice guys" asked the giantess. "You mind if I kiss them too?"

Vince shook his head. Rainbow Dash suddenly stopped in the middle of the street. The fans and paparazzis came closer to them. Austen and brian could stop running for a little time. It didn't take long until Dashie placed her car sized palm onto the ground, exactly in front of Austen and Brian, who at first didn't know what to react.

"Hop on, guys! Come with us!"

Austen and Brian looked at each other and gave a high five. They stepped onto Dash's palm and the giantess liften the two of them up in the air, in front her face. "Who wants to kiss rainbow Dash first?"

Brian looked at Austen. "You first, Aus! You wanted it, now you can get it. I don't mind being the second."

"THIRD!" shouted Vince from Dashie's bra.

"Third, then." clarified Brian.

"No, dude. You will kiss her first." said Austen. "You deserve it."

"Do I?"

"Yupp! Now go and kiss the giantess, or I'll eat all of your hidden food at home!"

Brian nodded and stood in front of Dash's cute face. He paressed and kissed her. For this, Dashie licked Brian's clothes, like a dog. Austen was the next. Austen kissed her too, but for this, the giantess poked him with her big fingers. Austen lost his balance and fell under Dash's bra, next to Vince. As gently as she could, Rainbow grabbed Brian and placed him next to the two guys in her breasts.

"Hope you're doing well. We're going to the coast."

"Man, this is amazing!" said Austen and touched the giant boobs. "Best day ever!"

A quarter of an hour quickly passed. The giantess pony left the busy towntown full of skyscrapers and walked towards the coast. She stepped down the pier onto the hot sand. At there, she took Austen and brian out of her bra and placed them onto the long pier. "Sorry, it we had only a short time together, boys." she threw a kiss at them, like in the romantic movies. "Think of me, if you're alone. See you later some time!"

Dashie opened her angelic blue wings and with Vince she flew up in the air. Austen and brian were left on the pier, they leaned onto the railing and sighed. They saw the blue giantess disappear in the purplish clouds. The sun slowly moved behind the earth, the sky became orange and the evening was approaching.

Comments

[bernabex27]

Estuvo interesante tu historia ánimo en todo en próximas historias (lo siento no se escribir en inglés complicaciones al tratar de traducir por Google traductor).

[Crystalbreeze]

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Gracias por amables palabras: D

[bernabex27]

Como te a ido con tus ideas sobre nueva historia?

[Crystalbreeze]

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Bueno, últimamente estoy trabajando en otro lugar en un idioma diferente. Puede que tenga ideas, de verdad, pero desde hace un año, cuando murió mi abuelo, comencé a escribir una novela de ciencia ficción en mi idioma nativo (en húngaro), que terminé durante el verano, pero se puso bastante mal: D Hoy en día , Trato de escribir cosas que un editor de libros puede distribuir si tengo tanta suerte. Dejé las historias de MLP por un tiempo, pero eso no significa que me haya ido.

[bernabex27]

Quería consultarte algo necesito consejo o ayuda o ejemplos necesito ayuda con escribir de guión a narrativa Se que también debo corregir mi español a ingles pero si haz conocido o charlado con chilenos usamos palabras extrañas para los otros países le cuesta entenderlo y el Google traductor no soluciona todas las palabras!.
Gracias por tu tiempo :)

Te dejo lo que me escribió alguien en fimfiction no se si es alguien que maneje la página...

Meeester

Querido bernabex27,

Tu historia Dos almas, un cuerpo y un sueño alado no ha sido moderada en FimFiction por la siguiente razón: Todas las historias deben estar en inglés.

Tu historia está escrita en formato de guión, lo cual no está permitido en Fimfiction. Si desea revisar su historia para que se escriba en un formato narrativo más tradicional y volver a enviarla, no dude en hacerlo.

Tiene una grave falta de mayúsculas a lo largo de la historia.

Realice los cambios necesarios y vuelva a enviarlo.

Consulte las preguntas frecuentes para obtener información adicional y reglas, o no dude en responder a este mensaje de correo electrónico si no está seguro de algo.

[bernabex27]

Lo lamento por tu perdida no sabia no quería causar problemas con mis problemas. Lo siento

[Crystalbreeze]

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No hay problema, en serio, no tienes que disculparte por nada. A mi modo de ver, Meester dice que no escribiste tu historia en una narrativa ordinaria (así que no es la forma en que escriben un libro, sino toda una pieza escénica que es bastante única, felicitaciones). Había muchas letras mayúsculas en tu trabajo y dejaste muchas líneas en blanco. Pero eso está en la carta, así que creo que tú también lo sabías :) El punto es escribir tu historia como si estuvieras escribiendo un libro. Con buenos párrafos largos, texto y diálogos detallados, capítulos, cosas así. Entonces, de repente, pude sugerir esto, espero poder ayudar.

[bernabex27]

Mil gracias en serio me ayudo mucho se lo agradezco.
Trataré de hacerlo más largo y evitar escribir esto ejemplo:

- Twilight: (pensativa) (no recuerdo que este libro estuviera entre mis estantes) ¡¡Spike!!

Pero solo recibió silenció

-twilight: oh, es cierto spike me había dicho que iría ayudar a rarity en su tienda

[Crystalbreeze]

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¡buena suerte!

[bernabex27]

Gracias por todo esto cuando avance un poco más te aviso cuidate mucho nos vemos.
Antes que me vaya como es la página que estás escribiendo tu otra historia de ciencia ficción en tu idioma para leerla?

[Crystalbreeze]

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No escribí específicamente mi novela en una página, la escribí en Microsoft Word y no la publiqué, aunque la envié a una editorial por interés, pero fue mala y no creo que se lea, pero sigue siendo mi obra favorita. Puedo enviárselo ahora si ingresa una dirección de correo electrónico, solo esté preparado para que tenga que traducir y que esta fue mi primera novela, que al final entiendo, y, por supuesto, la historia no tiene lugar en el universo MLP

[bernabex27]

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Sirve eso

[Crystalbreeze]

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Hecho :D

[bernabex27]

OK en la noche la leo porque en éstos momentos estamos ordenando e limpiando la casa.

Cuidate mucho y si ya es de noche por allá buenas noches aquí van hacer las 4 de la tarde bye