Stormer's turn

This was a story suggested to me. the one who sent me the message for it, well she knows who she is.

Chapters (6)

Memories · 27th Dec 2011 · 628 words
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Spiraling Eternity · 20th Jan 2012 · 941 words
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Preformance · 20th Jan 2012 · 758 words
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Burn it to the ground · 28th Dec 2011 · 592 words
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From my hand, to your heart. · 20th Jan 2012 · 685 words
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I'ts my turn. · 20th Jan 2012 · 319 words
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#1 · Dec 27th, 2011 · · · Spiraling Eternity ·

WHAT KIND OF STORY IS THIS?

Hoofprint

Hoofprint #2 · Dec 27th, 2011 · · · Spiraling Eternity ·

You lack alot of detail. I don't know much about the backstory, or even much about these characters. The dialogue is decent, but you lack detail and setting.

R3M1X

R3M1X #3 · Dec 27th, 2011 · · · Spiraling Eternity ·

You have to of read my other stories to know these characters.

akodkwodwa

akodkwodwa #4 · Dec 27th, 2011 · · · Preformance ·

wat

Doobie

Doobie #5 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · Preformance ·

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MrMusicalPony

MrMusicalPony #6 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · Burn it to the ground ·

91488
If you want people to know that they're characters from another story, then say so in the description. Just say it's a sequel to your last story, or alternatively you can simply add this story to your last one.
If you don't wish to do either, then you need to introduce the characters to people who don't know them.

R3M1X

R3M1X #7 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · Burn it to the ground ·

Thanks MrMusical, But as my writing style is, 80% of my stories are just one large story, stories being chapters, chapters being paragraphs, everything goes down a level. But I guess since my style is a bit different I should inform readers. But really the title should lead on saying : "this isn't the first story".

R3M1X