Brony/Biologist/Tennis/Soccer Player. Oh, I write fan fiction too!!
A young Pegasus ends up joining the Wonderbolts after an incident in the best flier competition. Soon, his life and that of everypony around him will change in a battle against unknown enemies.
The translation of a story first written in spanish with great reception among the spanish-speaking readers.
Also uses the pooryorick's Shadowbolt characters.
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OOH WOOOW
This fic is well written. Going to track and see how it plays out from here.
Extremely well written. 5 stars and a track.
Not bad, definately a good read, but it was littered with errors that probably happened in translation.
“Do you think he might join them?” said the rookie with worry, “you’ll remember the tried doing it with me some time ago in the Everfree forest.”
Translation error?
Also: “You should know that since today’s the competence, the factory doesn’t work,”
I think the word you're looking for is competition, not competence. This mistake occurs several times throught the story.
Good job, I'll be watching.
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Wow, thanks for reading! And for pointing out these mistakes, I'll be sure to correct them soon! I have to say that these happened because I (the author) did the entire proofreading because my editor had not arrived yet and I was itching to post it.
And thanks to everypony for reading, I'm currently working on chapter two's translation, I'll post it in a few days (I hope). Anyhow, seeing that I'm keeping the 5.0 flat is just awesome (for being only 6 ratings, I must say I'm really excited by its early reception).
Stay tuned for more!!
Glad to see this here!
From what I read you'll have somepony proof-read it for you? That's cool dude! Although, won't this make the 'translation spell joke' a bit unnecessary? 
You know what I'm talking about! 
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Keep the translation spell, that's the original language
OOHHH SNAP
and why is it that im the first?
O__O
i cannot even begin to describe all the epicness and win in this story...
Cool story! I see it hasn't updated for a long while... Is it dead?
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No no it's not dead
It's just that I'm in the middle of the semester and I'm not geting that much chance to continue translating this story, but I'll see if I can post something this week or the next one.
Thanks for reading!!!
This is going good