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12 years ago, I lost someone very important, though I didn't know how important she was to me at the time. For 12 years I've lived in regret for driving her out of the house. Now 12 years from that moment, I now have a better understanding of what happened to her. She was taken from our world, and sent to another, to do God-knows-what for whoever kidnapped her. I will find her, and I will beat anyone who gets in my way. Be it hero, villain, and especially the one who took her in the first place. I am Jack, and I will bring defeat anyone who gets in my way!

While I’m not as tryhard as my son- *Hey!* Well I’m sorry sweetheart, but that did sound a little tryhard! Also ‘I will bring defeat anyone who gets in my way’? You might wanna take out ‘bring’, that just makes it sound worse, and replace ‘defeat’ with ‘beat’. Anyway, as I was saying. I won’t stop until I can hold my daughter in my arms again! I am Nicole, and I will get my baby girl back!


Think of this as an extension of Roaring Winds and Rising Tides, not a sequel or prequel since this story is happening at the same time as that story.

Elements from the Tales games will be used, specifically the Artes and items.

EDIT: That little jab at Jack’s grammar, was a jab at my own grammar for missing that when I first wrote it. I know I could have simply changed it, and fixed the problem, but this seemed funnier to me.

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