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Yay.
... Now I'm wondering if Spike and Richard can communicate.
Twilight you cruel bitch!
Those Stupid Elements won't do Crap without Fluttershy. And even then, Richard/Deathclaw is NOT A FRICKIN BAD GUY, STUPID! 😡
Yay a new chapter and spike is a heroic Dragon
Oh its about too go down 😁🤩
Twilight the elements won't work on him at all if Fluttershy doesn't want to put it on. Also I can see it back fire on them giving Richard more power then ever before.
Another story has returned from the grave, hopeful this one won't be shot it the head and reburied again.
You've managed to capture Twilight's big-brainery pretty well. Intelligent enough to cast convoluted spells, but not stopping to think about the very real possibility that, "the beast" that Fluttershy's been meeting up with, may not be all that beastly.
I have a bad feeling about this.
A bit OOC for Twilight, did meeting the deathclaw had this much of a negative impact on her?
Maybe if Tim or whatever his name was gets some rainbow lasers in his face he could have a proper conversation with the ponies.
Good to see you didnt get to messed up at boot, always good to see an update!
Book horse is running at 126% stupidi-err capacity
Arming tactical rianbow laser
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yea twilight is very book smart but when it comes it actually applying that knowledge in the real world she fails miserably, along with actually thinking things differently than her rigid mindset requires.
I don't think that's your decision to make.
Twilight's being a real prize here, sooner or later someone's going to have to sit on her while Celestia or Spike tries to get through to her.
From what I remember this story is taking place before Discord's appearance in the season two premier. This helps to explain why Twilight is less experienced in this kind of situation. Not excuse it, just explain it.
Or am I remembering the time period wrong?
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Watching the harmony laser fail when applied to "mr. Claw" will hopefully bring them up short in confusion, sew doubts about their assumptions and get them started on asking the RIGHT questions.
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That would actually be pretty interesting, if the the elements acted on him like an auto translator instead of a petrification beam. That would make a lot of sense actually, as they are designed to fix harmony problems, and comunication is exactly what they need to resolve this issue more then anything.
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Jesus at the rate we're going the Elements are going to fix the bearers...maybe turn them into deathclaws themselves or something...
Its funny seeing the mental unstable Very powerful unicorn 'who once brainwashed an entire village' call something dangerous.
Also, incoming magic death-claw from friendship beam. that is if they can somehow trick Fluttershy into helping.
Eh.
Ah, ponies being dumb again. And Fluttershy with the amazing diplomacy. Gotta love it. Oh I was completely yelling at most of those ponies this chapter and congratulating Fluttershy.
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Ooh, I like that idea. It would make sense in a way.
Well this is going to be BLOODY!!!!!
So according to the ponies, the creature does not dezerve to live. Why? Because it is a monster. Why is it a monster? Because they are scared of it. So in short, they're going to try and kill something becaus- wait a second, this is sounding a great deal like what happened with Zecora.
Oh well, its not like the ponies can actually DO anything. You need all 6 elements to activate them, and Fluttershy would be unable to use her element to knowingly kill an innocent.
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That be hilarious, fix the problem by turning them into the problem, see how they like to be one of the most deadliest creatures known in video game history.
Return of the DeathClaw!
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I don't think Fluttershy's going to have anything to do with Twilight at the moment, Elements or otherwise. This is exactly like the situation with Discord, only Richard here isn't being a deliberate ass about it.
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There's a reason why Intelligence and Wisdom are different stats.
If you as a friend forbid me from talking to anyone, you're not going to be my friend much longer. If you try to enforce that will you might not be among the living for much longer. I do not care about your reasoning. That kind of behavior, especially followed by a physical threat, is abusive. I will not tolerate it. Fluttershy shouldn't either.
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“That deadly unstoppable evil monster we ran away from? Yea. He’s not evil. He was just hungry and misunderstood what was happening. I’ve been seeing him secretly for weeks and I’m perfectly fine. And seeing as how I’m the animal expert and have proven by my unharmed, still living body that I’m right, you should heed my words.”
“Danger pone, no go!”
But I suppose this is before Discord, and the Vampire Fruit Bats, and the Sanctuary, so of course they’re not going to listen. I’m waiting for the blast to return him to his “natural” state of “demon deathclaw”. That would show them.
Well, That could have gone better for poor Flutters. As "TheStoryWe-ver" said, it would be kinda cool if Spike and Richard could communicate. Maybe even cooler if he got there first somehow.
Actual problem in the MLP universe thought, why do they always leave spike behind?
He's your one lifeline of instant communication and yet you always leave him behind, because your shit upbringing of him makes him look like a child when he's closer to a teenager/adult.
I don't remember if you ever said what branch you're going to but now that you're in the school house you'll have time on the weekends to do what you want. Just keep your door closed and never answer it if it's not your turn for watch. (This part is for if you're in the marines) Also buy another blanket and bootbands. Have your roommates help you by flipping your bed over and using the bootbands to hold the sheets in place so you never have to make the bed only put your blanket in the closet.
I know I'm nitpicking here, but you forgot the 't' in 'thought'
Oh Twishit, you just made the two worst mistakes possible! You teyed to control one of your friends and you are taking Equestrias first and last line of defense against a creature that has done nothing wrong yet.
I hope Shy calls out your bullshit and tells you that the friendship you shared up till now is over, it’s the least that you deserve for your actions.
I don’t know if the elements will work past this point, the commons thread is broken and I highly doubt it will be fixed as even friendship has its limits in forgiveness.
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Yeah she seems to forget a lot that she doesn't actually have any real authority over anyone at this point, she is a librarian and a student of the princess, and also just because she knows somethings doesn't mean she is an expert on everything better that people who have actually have experience have done research and have experience on the subject matter.
while I'm happy that this story is back I'm also a bit iffy on two things: first the fact that Twilight is completely ignoring certain facts that should be obvious to her such as that Flutershy has repeatedly come back from her visits unharmed, and secondly this has nothing to do with pests in Applejack's farm so shouldn't Applejack be the voice of reason here?
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Thanks mate, I'll have that fixed in a second...
Annnnnd...
Done.
I thought the elements required all six of them to be used. Also, blatant disregard of facts, and a Twilight that sounds more like a manipulative narcissist.
my little pony, logic isn't magic
Super glad to see you back mate! Thanks for the chapter
A few chapters ago Richard had them caught just outside of the Everfree, pissed off at the trap they set for him. He could have attacked and killed them, but decided to show them mercy.
Only a fool shows mercy twice.
Fluttershy should be a in position to realize if her friends are set on a path to try to harm Richard again, then they're going to get themselves killed. This should be enough for FlutterBOLD to emerge and take drastic action.
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Intriguing! Maybe Spike could recruit Richard to join in his Thursday's game night.
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Because the writers didn't like him.
So. I love this story. Its good. Imma keep reading for sure.
One...nit pick. They listened to her entire story. Heard how he was kind and didn't attack her, there was even full on translation. No skewed wordings or misconceptions.
Yet without ryme or reason twilight immediately forbids her from seeing Richard. AND she wants to fight it even with all the evidence pointing to the contrary?
Sorry it just... to me it doesn't fit her character type....she's analytical. She studies. Takes in facts. This twilight is acting more like rainbow dash. Brash, barely any thought process after facts and fiction have been separated.
Feels like her actions have been rushed is all I'm saying. Then again, you might be going for the overprotective helicopter friends herd thingy...so it sort of fits?
I still like the story though. Neat concept.
Glad to see your back, another great chapter! Keep up the great work
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it might have been stumbling upon all those gutted manticores
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Watch, the EoH do absolutely fuck-all cuz he's not bad.
*EoH Discharge*
Twilight-"Nothing? Hit it again Girls, Hit it again!"
*EoH Discharge*
T-"Huh?"
*EoH Discharge*
*EoH Discharge*
Richard- "Are you fucking done yet?"
*EoH Discharge, Twilight blacks out*
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Yes, this would likely trigger a 'fuckyou, Former friend' response in me as well. Maybe even a beat down if they tried to follow through. Maybe Fluttershy had secret martial arts training[not necessarily asian martial arts, maybe USMC style hand-to-hand] cuz there was a nice merc that gave her some defense training after they... 'defused' a... 'situation'.
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So much 'Yes!'
10611827 Thankfully someone put this into words before I could. You've hit the nail on the head.
This kind of behaviour from them, along with the first interaction (which was infinitely more understandable than this one) genuinely makes me dislike them. At present, I hope Fluttershy leaves them as friends entirely. I hope the elements stop working entirely for them if they continue like this, and if they ever attack him, I hope Richard at least maims them a bit. Might seem harsh, but they have already committed attempted murder, and are now attempting to abuse and control their 'friend.' With friends like that, who needs enemies?
I'm hoping they snap out if it, but if the story turns into Fluttershy and Richard basically giving the rest a middle finger and leaving entirely, I'm fine with that too. Can only keep reading to see what happens, right?
Good to see this again
Your Twilight is a cunt.