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Well, that was a fun adventure. Now for a good nap on one side, and panicked overreaction on the other!
Calling it now, Twilight is going to send her findings to Celestia along with the experience... and Celestia's not gonna be happy.
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I think the cmc is gonna enter first and thats gonna make twilight call for help from celestia..
Phew, that almost escalated to the point of no return. Too bad Fluttershy could not converse with him.
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Or that. That works too. Cutie mark crusaders: Deathclaw tamers
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But she did understand him.
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Understand, yes. Communicate, no. He just hears some sort of tonal horse-language.
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If he could understand them, he would convince they are not another mindless beasts but sapient beings.
Well they sure were lucky. Messing with a f*ckmothering DeathClaw like that, AND living to tell the tale.
Keep it up.
Groovy my guy this chapter is Groovy. 👍
You have the nastiest habit of releasing these at like 2am where I live. You just love to deprive me of sleep, don't you?
Hmm... did he accidentally trigger a 'kill' instinct on flutters there by accident? Well that is concerning.
You actually caught me off guard with how quickly he dispatched that flytrap I really thought that was going to be the end of the chapter, but nope! He had to get one last scare in. Are we sure he's a deathclaw and not from Monster's Inc.? I'm not so sure now...
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How do we know the deathclaw isn't IN Monsters Inc?
I love this chapter 🤩👍👌!!!!!!
And now Fluttershy gets to tell the rest of them that they literally walked into the woods to attack a creature that was minding its own buisiness because it wasn't a pony. Any danger, any evil, its something they created for themselves. So much for friendship.
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I think he was a bit too pissed off to try to convince them of anything like that...
If his hunger wasn't at the forefront he probably wouldn't have accidentally tried hurting Fluttershy. after all that's what set him off in the first place
I'm sorry. Everytime I read this, my mind thinks of this...
That was very entertaining to read, cant wait for the next chapter
I wonder at which point in the story they'll be able to have a normal conversation with eachother
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Well he did almost accidentally maim fluttershy but she seemed to realize what happened was an accident he just trying to pet her not to mention I have a feeling Fluttershy is going back into forest very soon.
i was literally shaking with excitement when I realized this chapter came out and with each chapter I want more. I think I might have a problem and you are clearly way too skilled at sucking me into your stories, unfair.
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Oh most definitely.
I really dislike Richard. Whether he's a bad character or not I can't say for sure, but his personality and actions ticks me off. Am I the only one?
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I was surprised too that it didn't end there and it made the ending all the sweeter
I think its actually very believable how fast he can dispatch that flytrap in climb up, especially with them walking thinking the danger is gone, he could almost walk very slowly to catch up with his body size. When I imagine a deathlaw I think a bear but almost completely bulletproof (excluding things like .50 cal even then its likely it would take multiple shot to the head to kill), bigger, and with a slight regeneration rate to boot.
So he has to fight with his instincts I feel sorry for him
Goes from petting the pony to staring at his own slash-marks seconds later...
This is the power of King Crimson!
Meh, I've never been one to be casul. HARDCORE FO' LIFE!
Also? Damn good work.
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Is there anything you dislike about him in particular?
My God, I was so excited thought this whole chapter. You sure do know how to make a great chase scene, I'll give you that. I eagerly await future chapters. Keep up the great work!
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His actions or rather his reactions aren't that bad nor without justification. All things considered he went from a bad day where he couldn't do anything about it to a bad day where he actually has the weight to throw around in retaliation. As for the whole eating thing, I don't think he'd actually go through with it and it was mostly an oppotune way to scare them.
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He's just recently been turned into a monstrosity in a new world and hardly seems to care. He transitions too smoothly from functional member of society to cave/forest/castle dwelling carnivorous monster. He didn't try to find answers to his predicament, not even when presented with other sapient creatures. He acts more like a dragon, especially when he decided the forest was "his" despite just arriving and not knowing where he was. He also lacks awareness of how his new form and actions can be perceived. He's a monster who left a bunch of dead bodies and decides to go meet the people who found the bodies. Then decides to chase them. What could go wrong?
But yeah, that's the main gist of why I dislike him. I'm honestly hoping for an explanation that him turning into a deathclaw seriously altered his state of mind.
He's also too vulgar for my liking, but that may just be my Rarity showing.
Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!
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same with fluttershy going back in. probably be the only one with safe passage into the forest.
So either his beastly instincts are trying to control him or he still doesn’t know his own strength I guess, either way, I’m internally laughing at their reactions.
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Well, he did say they weren’t welcome.
And it sounds like Flutters heard his stomach and the rotten meat comment, so now she’s near-certain that he only attacked because he was hungry for fresh food.
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I don't think you're the only one (especially when you laid out that well thought out argument in your favor (not me, I like his personality because it's amusing and I'm easily amused (but we are all allowed to have our own opinions)) because Richard has definitely taken some questionable actions with equally questionable logic but I personally don't think it detracts anything from the story. (Just stating my completely unwanted opinion)
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He got blinded twice by Twilight, and tricked into falling down a pit. I'd be pissed too.
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same
Wonderful as always, keep up the good work!
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I too dislike Richard, such a transformation should affect more than just his body. Animals are ruled by their hunger and instincts, and yet he's walking around like a scaley dudley-do-right in a strange land without even attempting to feed the beast in his belly. Being hungry for that long does not make you "hangry" and snarky, it makes you desperate and single-minded on getting some damn sustenance.
Great chapter! That was certainly more then I thought I'd be and really creative too!
I think a good encounter might be with some dragons, maybe teenager dragons. This could happen if he gets kinda bummed out that no one can match up to him. Also, you might need to come up with dragon bg lore. Because frankly, there are like... No huge dragons besides the ONE we saw in the show, maybe dragons don't normally grow that large?
Oh, I'm sure you have this in mind but next chapter ought to have Twilight reading up on stuff. Eventually landing on the topics of demons!
11/10 wooo!
Cool would love to see more.
Interesting.. Did our Death-Boi have some kind of blackout and the Deathclaw instincts kicked in during said blackout? That's kinda how I interpreted it..
Either way you "slice it"... Fuck.
Them.
Pinkie Pie.
You hit enter one too many times here.
Rarity.
Look at Boba Fett over here, escaping the Sarlacc and everything!
Damn...
Zecora got the memo right?
Right?
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I do not believe "escaped" is the correct verb. Pretty sure whatever that plant was, it is very much past tense. As in, it is now a salad.