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I see you there with your FMA references.
kinda wonder how magic will effect him. Being a death-claw means he is a lizard who was pumped full of radiation. So, maybe magic will turn him even further crazy. Maybe like a glowing death-claw but with magic. Anyway entertaining so far kinda annoyed he wasted so much meat though. Would be hilarious if he tried to bite the crystal tree.
Take out the second waking
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Equestria isn't even ready for a single deathclaw why add a second one
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oh dear god a magic based Darthclaw that is resistant to magic.
Didn’t think a FMA reference would be here
This is really good
The story is developing in a nice pace, I'd say. Though I'm really curious to know what is the purpose of bringing Richard here?
I think it was a pretty good reference. Also, everybody other than Twilight has totally stupid reasons for being there. Pinkie to force something to attand q party, Rainbow Dash to randimly pick a fight, Fluttershy to play like its her pet and make it "apologize" for stupid shit. If they keep that up its going to keave a bad first impression.
I didn’t expect a Full metal alchemist we are friends but it works
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ah! I see you are a man of culture as well
I hope they find him while he’s fishing, just trying to grab the fish with his hands over and over
You walk into predator area of forest, yet you surprised by predator marking territories and animal carcasses?
No need to hunt when you have all that flesh just laying there for the taking. And no way to store it, so gorging is a perfectly viable and desirable tactic. Doubly so with a reptilian physiology.
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Whoopsie, looks like that second waking’s free trial of living expired. Thanks for spotting that, mate.
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Fluttershy understood that. She accepted it.
She was just mourning the loss.
It's perfectly reasonable.
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np dude
Dying for the next chapter already, also I can't wait for them to meet our "little" deathclaw soon. There's many possible situations and outcomes and I can't do anything but wait.... Unfair.....
This story is so good. Looking forward for the future chapters.
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FMA? I feel like I need to be taught.
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Full metal alchemist
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What?
Love the story can't wait for more
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At least they got a wake-up call about what they may very well be facing.
Its goin good! Keep it up!
Rarity stepped in deathclaw shit, didn't she.
Well... They wanted a monster.
They got one😁
I think they ought to encounter Richard in some capacity before they leave the forest. That could lead to a lot of things.
1. Richard trying to kill them for food only to hear then speak at some point.
2. They successfully hide from him and get some kind of impression of him, could be bad, or a something with a 'light at the end of the tunnel' impression.
3. Fluttershy could try to communicate with him, maybe with the reveal that Richard actually *can't* understand them. She could get taken to be a pet, or escape, idk.
4. Could encounter him in just a few literally moments after this chapter, perhaps he came back to gather the rest of the manticore he killed (maybe before he was full and just didn't think he had to retrieve them right then. But also he can prob eat rotten meat.)
Yeah, that's why my vote goes towards Richard's early encounter.
I fucking love it
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yup
I am both excited as fk and terrified by the thought of the six's reaction to mr claw
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Piss actually, I think
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Oh God I hope it's 3 or 4, please please please but honestly I'll be stoked as long as they meet him next chapter
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Either way, it's still pretty bad.
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Damn straight!
I mean, hopefully they're aware that manticore would've left all of them in much the same state. Maybe cleaner but only because it would be less wasteful with its food. If anything, Fluttershy should be pissed that this mystery monster seemingly killed more for sport than for sustenance. Though that's just one way of interpreting the grizzly scene before them. I just hope they don't jump straight to Frankenstein levels of "kill the monster." I got enough of that from Evergreen Heart.
10344196They DID assume it was a disturbance caused by a Monster...
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Mane Six encounters Deathclaw while leaving the Everfree.
Chase scene ensues.
Mane Six speak, Deathclaw slows to a stop.
The distance between parties grows to about 1/4 mile then Fluttershy hears an extremely confused roar, "They TALK?! WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?!"
10344286 10348472 Yes, 3 or 4 are good.
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Yeah, Defending yourself in a 1vXX and walking away 'unscathed' can seem like an unnecessarily brutal domination if there is an inherent difference in experience or damage resistance between combatants.
Shudder
Shutter is a form of curtain, or the iris in the aperture of a camera. Shudder is to shake, usually in fear.
You are a good writer. I like this story. You have the detail and the emotions. I look forward to reading more. Deep things going . Thank you
Wazzlo~
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Thanks for the catch mate.
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I'm sorry for being so terrifying in appearance (something I can not control) that I scared a few tiny animals.
I'm sorry for having no choice but to eat (unless I want starve to death).
I'm sorry I defended myself with lethal force again animals who only wanted to kill me (I should have just let them main me until they did so much damage that it's fatal or bled to death).
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Exactly!
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
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I have no idea personally but you aren't the only person who's hoping it's really soon (at least I hope you are because I certainly am)
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I most certainly am hoping it is.
Augh! Badass is so cute! I can barely handle it!
Nice place for that reference, wasn't expecting you to use the whole thing.