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Poor poor Twilight
A Deathclaw only wants 2 things, Food and more food.
Hum. Needs some work. Definitely going a bit back and forth sometimes, and there are a few spelling mistakes them and again, but its pretty good.
ok so what type of deathclaw is he
Do deathclaws dream and can princess Luna even meet our main man in the dreamscape because he's a deathclaw now?
Well that's one way to 'thin out' the manticore population.
I'm beginning to feel slightly shanghai'd by that whole "not so deadly" story title.
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And ponies are just walking steaks to them XD
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That's not what I'm looking for in a story, personally. I hope that's not where this is going.
I say, that was rather messy wasn't it? Luckily fresh blood cleans off of scales quite well, though he's going to want to stay on top of that. Dried blood is utter buggery to work out. Would have been amusing if he'd bedded down in the Cave of Harmony of all places.
Speaking of which, whereabouts are we in the timeline?
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Given the latest chapter I agree he’s Mythic Deathclaw alright.
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Since he was playing new vegas he has to be an alpha male one if not a legendary one
hy do not make him do sumthing out kerter KEEP BLOOD FOR BlOOD Deathclaw ?
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And to conquer the world with hugs, obviously.
dumbass should of ate the other manticores
Yay
Well he left a horrifying surprise for the girls when they find the bodies
>I'm sure he's nice.
>Pile of mutilated corpses
Hmm, I'm sure there's no way there could be any unfortunate misunderstandings waiting to happen...
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Obviously
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Why do your profile pic matches perfectly with your comment?
I wonder if hes gonna become an alpha eventually....or the magic equivalent of a glowing deathclaw.
So question for you. Is he of the variety of deathclaw that can learn to speak? I know the ones that could talk in Fallout 2 were experimented on with the FEV by the Enclave but from what I remember it just made them more intelligent. They were able to mimic speech on their own. Just curious as to whether our protagonist will ever be able to speak his thoughts.
Hopefully the ponies aren't hold the idiot ball. From what theycwere saying it looks like they're going off to attack an evil dangerous monster because it was "scary" even though it never actually did anything to hurt anyone. And hopefully they don't go and use the manticores being killed as a reason to demonize him, because what else could he have done? Sing a magical friendship song? If he didn't kill them they would have killed him, so if the ponies blame him they're admitting that they don't have a right to not ket monsters kill them.
Since you mentioned unicorn Twilight, I have to assume this story takes place prior to Season 3?
Well, this seems promising. Cooperation seems like a distinct possibility, but honestly I’m really vibin with the DOOM-esque power fantasy he’s got going. Hell, that may become a more apt description as he starts to fight demons, if that intro was anything to go by. It’ll be pretty neat to see how he’s handled.
Going to ask this now is but is this just going to be a story mainly focused on a human riding shotgun for a deathclaw brain (aka more of this murder feast like in the latest chapter) or are we going to see more of the guy who decided to play with his pet lizard. cause i have read enough of one and not enough of the other
Richard: https://youtu.be/VJT0Xh5ZrOg?t=67
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You sir. You must've read my damn mind when I was writing that scene.
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We'll see.
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Your assumption would be correct.
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At some point, he will. And with what I have in mind, the way he does so should prove to be rather interesting.
10288537 Yup.
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To sorta answer the majority of the question, which if I'm not mistake is basically "Is this guy going to be more Hyde than Jekyll for the whole story?" I would say that for the most part, he might .
Now I'm not saying that he will always be 100% murder machine throughout his stay in Equestria, cause there will be an instance that'll definitely affect him emotion/personality-wise and will definitely mellow him out, I assure you. There will just be times when our boy replaces "be at peace" with "be ripped to pieces."
I also originally thought that rather than a guy "ride shotgun with a deathclaw brain," it would probably be the other way around, with the guy's brain basically being his own, while a few "switches" were just added in. These switches would then be "flipped" when there came a problem where when human brain didn't cut it, deathclaw brawn would then be introduced.
Now what I basically mean by that is that due to a drastic difference in both mind and body between a regular guy and a absolute UNIT of a monster, it should come to no one's surprise when there might come an instance or two when the guy is pushed so far over his limit that he just says "fuck it" and lets someone else take over, And In Richard's case, that would be whatever hellish instincts were put into your average deathclaw.
Basically think of Richard's case as being one where a guy was given a really big and really viscous dog. Now at first, he would obviously have trouble controlling it right? Sometimes he would even wonder who was really the one in charge. But with lots of time and experience with the dog, he would be able to control it and even train it to do tricks.
Pretty much like when Aang goes into the avatar state now that I think about.
Sorry if I sounded like I was rambling through all of that, cause I think I pretty much was. I do really hope I at least answered half of your question though. Hopefully. Take care, mate.
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I do my best. I did one for chapter 0 and now this one. Lets see if I can keep going :)
I'm need more....
Please...
I eagerly await the day I divine what the moral or meaning of your story is. It is shaping up to be very entertaining.
Normally I'd prefer stories that upload weekly, however chapter-length does make up for any time without being able to read. Kind of like, "Well aged wine."
Wise-ish words from someone's comment I don't remember. But I still do prefer weekly updates because I'd likely lose interest without reading it in a while. You know, I keep telling my self, "Let's read this story now!" but then I keep thinking, "No, wait for more chapters."
Every Alpha needs a throne
You really need an editor.
And a proof reader.
I love how during the manticore massacre it kept jumping between the massacre, and the mane 6 basically talking about how this big scary lizard is most likely a big misunderstood friendly fellow that just so happens to be scary.
I think that the way you did that added some measure of comedic value to this chapter. More so than the dick jokes did.
But that's just my opinion.
This is so good. Though with him defeating 11 manticores... im not so sure the story title really applies anymore...
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Deathclaws aren't that tough, tbh.
If your skills are right, anyone can take one down.
In Vegas,I cleared the entire quarry with a lot of bullets and a sniper rifle.
I've run into them around corners in every fallout game since 3, and I've died less times to Deathclaws than bloat sprites.
It's about skills, strategy, as well as weapons taking third place.
Suicide mutants, aim for the nuke.
Ghouls aim for the head.
Bloat sprites, just run.
Cazadores... mini nuke and take them out with prejudice!!
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That's not a bad idea...after all, a king can't be king without his subjects.
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Completely understandable.
"I want more!" Chanting
Damn that was fun to read. And I like the style you got here
I FUCKIN LOVE THIS!😤👌
more more more more more more more more more more
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I could tell. It can happen when you're used to using the military time format (24-hour format for those who may not understand what I'm referring to). Just happy I could help clear some things.
**Thinking about the bloody and visceral aftermath of Richard's fight**
Yeah...all that scientific data...
I can’t wait for the next chapter, I really want to see the Main Six reaction to Richard and the slaughter he caused.
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I know! Just think of the after action reports we could get off their corpses!
*Unhinged squee*