Twilight Sparkle, having lived her life to the fullest, settles down with her husband and her children. But something worries her, and it involves her children and the time she has left.
(Takes place in alternate timeline in the future after Season 9)
It is four years ago on this day that I became a Brony, and to celebrate that I made this short story. It isn't much, but it's what I got. Feel free to critique it and give feedback to your hearts content.
Edit Jan 25, 2021: Found this video of an audio reading of this story. Feel free to look at it.
https://youtu.be/zUTeSnJHm3E
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Not bad.
Well, nicely done story. And happy brony-versary if I may say so ^^
As a French guy I don't know how "worth" my opinions and criticisms are when it comes to judge an English-written story. But anyway, I think a story based on Twilight's parental issues and concerns is a good idea. A longer story would have been nice though, but I know how time-consuming writing can be as I am doing the same myself. Still nice for a first story. In the hope of seeing more work, I'm following you ;)