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Captain Obvious


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*plays sinister music in the background*

these ponies are about to ruin this man's entire stay in equestria.

The only question is how liberal are those tags in regards to this statement. This doesn't need an answer or reply just getting hyped for more chapters.

Seems innocent enough...

I'm intrigued, yet horrified by the tags on what this may play itself out to.

Shoul I be worried? Yes, worried sounds right at this moment.

question:When one man ends up in Equestria, he gets a lot of attention from the locals. But what happens when he gets too much attention?

answer:He questions his life choices or remain blissfully unaware of how screwed he really is. Either way he's not going to survive this uninjured or at all.

As a bystander, I'm going to question a few hints that things weren't on the level.

She had already moved things into his castle.
Her name was on the eviction letter.
There was no way she couldn't have helped him find a job.

I'm sure she had a hand in cutting off all escape routes so that he would have to be forced to live at her castle. Since there isn't a sex tag, going to go straight to yandere also since Spike or starlight doesn't have a tag I have no hope of them surviving until the end of this unless they remains in the background.

Nice i like the end but plz don't up the yandere to fast, let it rise slowly

Oh it's happening

10092947
Honestly, thank you for this comment. It really was more helpful than you know.

10093285
I could use a second opinion on if Twilight is the yandere or is she just a red herring, everything seems to be pointing to her however there isn't enough red flags. I also can't seem to imagine how Lyra plays into this or any of the other tags except for horror, because yandere are scary.

10093299
im thinking all mares in this may be yandere considering that the description says and i quote
"When one man ends up in Equestria, he gets a lot of attention from the locals. But what happens when he gets too much attention?"
if that aint a red flag i dont know what is.

9960163
That's how they lure you in.

10092924
Death by Snu Snu?

10246619
there isn't a death tag, however there are far more dangerous ways a yandere can express their love specifically if that yandere has magic the ultimate deus ex as it can do whatever the story needs it to do or not be able to do.

Is there an eta on the next chapter?

story isn't dead. I'm working a lot of overtime since covid screwed up the year. bad news, I'm behind on the story. good news (for me) is I'm making more money. I'm writing bit by bit. I have gone through and corrected spelling and grammar.

10547514
Good to hear the story is not dead and sorry to hear that Covid has been effecting you negatively

10547514
lie it obvious.:facehoof:

10659363
Not necessarily I have seen story’s that continue from way long gaps then this die to personal stuff the writer has going

Would you mind telling me where you got the story image?

Also a promising start to a CLINGER of a story.

10547514
I'm really glad to hear that you still have the story on your mind and are doing well. Take care man

I hope you continue this story!

Hope you revive this story someday, a good yandere/obsessed Twilight story is very rare.

will there be an update?

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