• Member Since 10th Nov, 2014
  • offline last seen Jul 8th, 2022

Captain Obvious


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A weekend hunting trip quickly goes south when a brief flash suddenly appears in the road. Now, three people are stuck in the land of Equestria with no way to contact loved ones, or any clue on how to get back home. They figure their best bet would be to seek out some sort of civilization...


...until something goes wrong.

First story. Tell me how bad it is. Seriously, I won't get any better with people kissing my ass.

EDIT: Also last story. I started writing this for all the wrong reasons. I got tired of reading the same old shit, so I decided to start writing something different. I never wanted to write. So if anyone wants to finish this, just let me know. I can give you bullet points of what the original idea was. Or you can make it your own. Whatever works.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

Looks good to me. Sorry for not slamming it.

You piece of shit,
I should report this to the the fucking DEA for how dank this fucking jizz-fest of a story is you fucking land-whale.

Cool! Keep them coming!!!!!

Oh, nevermind. It's the meme for the cover.

Perfectly balanced, as all things should be

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