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This work had been lying around as a collection of notes for a while, so I thought I'd string them together into a full story. It's a little darker than I'm used to writing, but I enjoyed the challenge of trying to handle the subject matter, and having fun playing with this site's word effects. Let me know how you think it affects the narrative - good, bad, whatever.

Credit for proofreading goes to AskTeenageScootaloo.

Starting, and you have potential based on just a phase.

To the author - hi! read your story about 3 days ago.
I had previously read Just a phase a long time ago but stopped for it was too long & comment section gave away the ending
especially like the part where dream tell his dad off & slightly ambiguous ending:unsuresweetie:

p.s: don't know if dream chaser died in sweetie belle's tale just a phase?

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Hi,

Sorry, I didn't realize the spoilers were so obvious in the story's comments. I'll add a spoiler warning to the story, since I don't want to go around pruning comments.

This story and Just a Phase are completely different, although they do share a common universe.

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hello there:pinkiehappy:
with just a phase - yeah. it was years ago...but i am glad you're something about it now:yay:
Oh! i already knew that by reading the author's note.

p.s: so... there's a story i wrote (when first arriving on this site back in 2017, although left unfinished/released) for a multitude of reasons! it involves the subject matter of rape & with twilight sparkle. don't wanna give anymore details.
PM me if you wish to know more;)

This was not what I expected in a good way. I was expecting rape or trade of sex for support, drugs, booze, or kidnapping into slavery of some kind... I got this and it was way more tame.

Well done!

I like this, It's short and relatively simple. Nice work my friend.

I really wish this was continued.

Short, brutal, and inventive. A very nice piece examing a darker setting much like your other story, Just a Phase. The unique formatting was just the cherry on top.

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