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CoyoteXray


"Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read"! - Groucho Marx

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The Storm King Invasion had many effects, not least of which is that it raised doubts about many of the ponies tasked with defending Equestria. At least it certainly did in the mind of Rainbow Dash. She hasn't thought much about it lately. But a problem within the Wonderbolts brings her once again face to face with a certain mare, and a few unresolved issues.

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Heh, interesting. I like Dawn's attitude so far.

Comment posted by CoyoteXray deleted Nov 23rd, 2019

Just discovered the big disadvantage to writing the story on the site instead of on my own computer. I keep forgetting to save my work. This will be twice in two days that I'll have to rewrite big pieces of chapter 4. This sucks.

The Storm King Invasion had many effects, not least of which is that it raised questions about those sworn to defend Equestria. At least it certainly did in the mind of Rainbow Dash

I know Rainbow Dash is one of Equestria's defenders, but... What took her so long?

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Well indeed. I guess I never thought of Rainbow Dash as a 'sworn' defender myself. But, I guess one could say that she came into the title through her relationship with Twilight, and just kept on rallying to the flag, and her friends, when the need arose. That to me at least is a bit different than an individual who is specifically trained and whose job is to serve and protect. That said, you may have spotted a serious flaw in my story description. I'll have to give the subject some thought.

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