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Something tells me that mare is corrupted by dark magic
Please tell me that corrupted mare is gonna get nerf from spyro
hmm i wonder what this cud men
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Trust me some of those mistakes weren't their before this site needs to fix its save feture
You know what I'm going to say again.
They treat Celestia and openly admit to want to use the Sun as economic weapon... Isnt that' high treason?'
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Yes but she had no proof she said it just like she doesnt have enough proof of her black marcket activities to lock her up
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She literally say what they plan to do with the sun...
ugh... her own words are enough evidence to lock her up. the nobles act this way cause celestia does nothing about it. proof? we've seen twilight replay things from memory.
She lies, master!
As if that isn't one of the most cliche expressions ever.
Harlock5399 serious talk.
High treason- Punishment by execution or banishment
In every MLP story she is seen and accepted as goddess. Its not so simpel. Dont forget she is literally the one leading em for at least a millenium. This need less agressiv and cookie but sneaky and clever. Need few work to change it for greater effect.
Everything points in Celestias favor
Geno/xenoside , destruction of the eco system, uniting every singel nation against Equestria for self protection.
This chapter needs work
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Anyone actualy talking like that with Celestia ruler of Equestria openly admiting there plans without plausibel denialibility would get locked away for good. period!
Seriously...
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Darvin Award all the way...
I help fix that ,ones my bloody pc is fixed and i can send our Author harlock5399 a edit for him to oversee. Nothing better than a side by side analysis
This made is such a bitch I hope Celestia and Spyro will be ok,and one day she joins a herd with him.
This chaper logic simply hurts...
Cant get the sun closer by ruining the hole planet... Hard edit needed perhaps a Artefact that is used like a laser Satellite
Can we assassinate those nobles?
I kind of have to blame Celestia for this situation.
She revealed that Spyro was the source of the dark magic before those laws were repealed, so not only is she breaking a (admittedly unfair) law (that she intends to revoke) she outright told everyone that she's doing it.
She's also making an infant dragon, even one with the mind of an adult human, fear for his life both here and by threatening to take him away (prison, exile, or execution, who knows?) if his magic didn't have medical applications (which was a long shot if it did).
This chapter is absolutely broken. It logic is like:
- I want minors murdered for no sensible reason
- I am going to commit high treason
- I am literally going to destroy the close Ecosystem of the world and kill us all
- A mere Nobel mocking the ruler of the nation? In the middle ages one could literally be executed for stepping so hard over the line
- Celestia has now literally a list of names of a mare that give openly high treason plans and World ending plans away
- In what world would Celestia not reduce this literally insane mare into a closed Asylum ?!
This chapter is a sooo broken its not even funny...
I can salvage the mares name... Thats about... Anything
True, true. Facts are facts. But has the mare considered the implications?
Awesome 31 individuell that are obviously are a threat to the national security. Making their arrest so mutch easier
Also planning to execute a minor due to him being potencial dangerous?
Like say... 31 ponies suggesting it in the first place?
Where a group of guards ponies prepared to hunt down a actual threat to Equestria.
She created and is allowed to nullify if given reasons that are logical and in the interest of the nation.
A empty threat, also might give reasons to suspect high treason. This is a principality not a democracy.
Royalty isn't usual nobility, that mare is pretty uneducated
Nobility is appointed by nobility and subject to be removed if in the interest of the nation.
Killing everyone, because the heated up air would eventually dispersing over the planet.
A solar ray attack on the other hoove...
Only if the story is fixing very broken logic