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great chapter
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Oh that’s good for you
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Just gave him the prologue he'll probably look at it when he has the time
More please
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There Will be after all of the currenct chapters are fixed
good
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I just gave my editer chapter 10 so the 13th chapter should be fixed soon
Will he change their fates, only time will tell.
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You wil see but the only thing i could say is actions has consequences
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Well their are many hexes and curses that require preperation
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Don’t need a beta reader as much as a copy editor for spelling, punctuation and extraneous word removal. A nice little story in spite of a few grassburrs.
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I second that. But its really a pain if hes a mobile phone writer. That why i will offer him this weekennd 2-3 hour of my time to simply edit it out a bit. Im german but since i have a pc 2-3 hours of free time and a interest to see it edited i do it ones for him yet and maybe another time along the road
The time skipped years need a better transition . Ones my pc is repaired and i send you the edit help i can offer i include some ideas. Maybe they help you make a short one
You cant get there after asking Celestia for it. Ever try not making your bed 3 years?
Try 3 days without the Appel parents not scolding/talking your ears off
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I have an editor
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I will offer my help later ones my pc is functional again. If i can help im happy otherwise you can simply ignore by help. I offer hopefully constructiv one
This was a parity chill chapter I love that.
Are pillows not cleaned in the Apple house hold?
What do Spyro knows about drugs? Isn't his pony father concerned about that sentance?
OK... WHY THOUGH?!
Literally 3 years are gone by