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Edit tommrow to tomorrow.
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What babe?
great story hope to see more sometime
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Babe with the power
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What power?
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Power of voodoo
before I theory post, does this take from that spyro remake trilogy, cause if it does then that bad guy can only be one person. If not then I'm going to go with sombra.
9786158
More please
9793182
Yes their will be more but I am also working on another thing right now and its almost done then I will get back on this
Please include grapple grounder.
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Grapple Grounder?
good story
"It should be ready tommrow but you will need to stay as a witness." She told me before she walked off to prepare.
"Get everything set up I want to do the trial tommrow." I said as guard set up the railings on the sides of the room.
"Tommrow we already turn the throne room into a court room but we have to set up safty measures incase she gets loose." I said as many of them nodded, and wrote it down.
it's tomorrow
Now it was time to interafate the prisoner myself she refused to talk to any of the guards so now I have now choice but to talk to her myself.
it's interrogate
She luaghed as she shook her head. " Because he's a threat from the moment i let myself get enveloped in dark magic i could feel his presence and his growing power but I didnt know where to find him, and you brought him right to Canterlot." She said.
it's laughed, didn't
"Ok then next question, are you working alone?" I asked, and she said nothing and It already realized that asking anymore qustions was useless, so i left the cell so the guard could lock it and I left.
it's questions
"Settle down, settle down i will answer all you questions." I said.
it's your
'Damn Princess getting in the way of our plans.' I thought as I stuggled against the chains.
it's struggled
"Can you hear me Gracious." A voice said my head as I stopped struggling, and closed my eyes.
in my head
'color=#265daf]I will when night comes kill the child in his sleep then return to me.' The voice order as I felt its presence leave my head as the ring on my horn snapped in two.[/color miss this
I breathed fire at her, but she quickly teleportedto the other side as the bed was set on fire.
fix teleportedto to teleported to
I flew towards her then we botj crasjed though the wall as I flew up letting her crash to the floor.
fix botj crasjed to both crashed
Two of them landed near her burning her legs and some of her fur, and tje last one nearly hit head dead on but she put up another shield that shattered when the fire ball hit.
fix tje to the
Celestai soon arrived and relaized what happed.
fix Celestai to Celestia
"I exploded most of the castle so I decided to nap in the garden."
I'm pretty extra sure you intended to write explored. Otherwise Spyro just casually blew up most of the castle, then decided to take a nap as hundreds die in the fires of the castle lol.
9871423
Well these are really just a huge proluge before it reaches the nain story plus thing's will go slower once it reaches it im even planing on the nightmare moon ep being a two chapters
Celestia must realised by than that her opponents can freely roam the castle! That better have consequences that improve Security
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She was powered by Dark magic so she could have easily killed the guards that saw her
9875936
Dont stop him from raising the alarm... We dont get any resistance so she has payed guard that looked the other way or extreamly slack security
9871423
Inexperianced or to eager to start the main story... Rather than slowly building up. Hes probably to nervous about this kicks story. I suggest that he edit hole chapters after completed story to add details for the story
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Grüße aus NRW
Ooh! That's the most sarcasm I've ever detected in a sentence since... Ever.
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Yeah... Need a littel work. Maybe someone creating a accident. a fire in the royalkitchen treating Celestias favorit cakes ? Grumpy Celestia is not to funny being around...
That created enougth chaos for a accomplice to slip by with Illusion magic? Could work...
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You need to mention casulties on Guard or its a clearly compromised Guard detail. Last alternativ would be dark magic boosted sleeping spells if you wanne spare Celestia 'dead/corrupted via gold' royal Guards.
I wonder who her dark master is.?
You probably already know about most of these spelling errors so a quick tip is capitalise the letter I when its alone
Worst interrogation ever...
Broken color command.
Auto aim fireballs
So Spyro in this story is a kind of Dark Anti-Magic uh... or rather a natural enemy of dark beings
This chapter and the hole comment section until now will make for some very good chapters!
This will be a fun run to write.
And hell to proofreading it all...
Death isn't the worst someone can suffer, I doubt the mare has ways to go after a Alicorn.
Though going on a killing spree is still possible.
Perhaps with the royal orphanage as target?
For someone with a already beforehoove burned leg she is surprisingly agil... Though maybe self levitation might explain it?
Pretty sure that mare was insane beyond help, everyone semi sane would have played the long game and saved themself to fight another day.