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what's that star wars quote about anger leading to hate, hate leads to suffer. If your not careful its going to lead to something far more sinister happening that you can't take back.
on another note, they took my pick for best pony so I'm good with whatever you decide to do to get her back.
KILLED
Truckers think they can do what they want, they have another thing coming.
FETCH ME THEIR SOULS
I'm now caught up.
You could use Nightmare Moon as excuse to keep your powers in check at the moment. Still need years of dedicated training/learning
Your aware that the mane 5 are now incapebel of holding the Prisoner in check!? Sleep while the enemy already brake into the apple familie once?! BIG MAC is a earthpony. If unicorn comes to recover the other guy he can't do jack to stop it.
You left them betrayed.
This might ruin the relationship that you builded up so far. You forced your will uppon them. Instead of giving very easy valid reasons
[[i have Alicorn grade firepower, years of minor puppet commanding experiences and are a predator by nature to keep up with the summon wolf]]
You backstabing them with a sleeping spell/curse?
Yeah...Might want to overthink THAT one unless you plan on walking very thin ice...
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He is wrapped in shadow chains and with how strong Spyro's magic is do you think he can break them plus Big Mac would likely knock hin out
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Plus he ain't planning on taking prisoners so he did them a favor so they wouldn't see the massacre
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My bad thanks. Maybe it just sound like that to me about the hoard. Reading often storys with hidden in between stuff inplied.
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Do they prevent teleportation? The Unicorn might come for a recover mission. Lose end on high value targets? Not very likely ignored
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Selfdefence while in a rescue mission is legit but don't forget there ponys. Foalnapped familie is no excuse for murder. Unless they use lethal methods.
Good thinking not telling em. But still, actions have consequences. You established Nobels having enougth power to force the Matriarch of Equestria having to involve courts to manage someone. Unless you want to force Celestia to play dirty and cover for Spyros actions...
Outside war times killing somebody in something else that selfdefence after lethal intend was clear is still murder
Might i ask who ever foalnapped Appeljack not to be involved with the Nobels? There is no positiv outcome that could pay in any way for a high social familie to screw with a friendly individual with favor to Celestia.
The Applefamilie get land for there actions from Celestia herself. Now after Lunas return ones more in the Royal families favor.
Unless its a twisted rescue plot? Sounds to suspicious so short after the meeting...
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The only time I see him useing it is if he's facing an army
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Didn't you read the possibles the doctor told Celestia
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Yep. My bad. I just re-read and found it... sorry
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Indeed but hes gaining strength before a good explanation is given When i send on a later date edits i will paint em in google doc so you can see :
fixed word gramatic
plotfillers to assist your existing story
stuff that needs your attention to detail
Overall amazing story line that needs some plot holes filled and a touch more personality developments.
Other than that? Love the story enough to invest my time to give assistance. If it can be used will be decided ny youand your trusted Editor
Your time jump makes time for that development
Me:All i can say is who ever took AJ is going to face hell.
Alucard:Ah the return of the why boner with a vengeance!!!!!?ππππππππ
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Just becuse he has that power doesn't meean he can complety control it, his body might not be able to withstand useing so much magic in such a short time
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That my line of thought. That were your timeskip can be later edited to fill the plothole slighly.
Focus exercise, reading books about magic and its practical practice. Asking researcher for help. (They test and collect his magic in routine medical exams). Celestia for more in depth explaining.
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There is barley any reaserch in dark magic except for a way to cure it
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Missing the point. I mean magic use in general. Mental and physical training to use it.
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He can't use normale magic only the magic in that book, and the dark powers of others
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I mean the general rules of magic.
Theory and practices to use.
Example:
I learnd how to fight in self defense. Unarmed & armed attackers.
First you learn the theory. How something works / should work. Than what its effects on you and your opponent is when in use. Next mental training. After that comes physical training. Without basis everything going south after all.
You cant just go for instinctiv reaction unless you wannt to screw yourself over. Sooner rather than later.
Belive me. Ones you broke your own bones after a mistake because of insufficent training or incorrect step execution you never rush stuff again.
Pain is a great teacher indeed...
YAY I like dragons and wolves (always have not a new thing)
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SOMEONE GET A GUN...oh NEVERMIND ITβS FRIENDLY
It's that npble who wanted Applejack as his son's bride.
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Not really you'll see his real plan next chapter
No they did not foalnap AJ time to kick some ass.
There is sooo mutch wrong with this chapter